First Day Together

Description

It's Krispy Lays~

It's all fluff~ And I tired to make it really cutesy and not long but I don't know... I need to write more haha~

I hope you guys will like it! Also, comment back some suggestions on how I can improve my writing!

I had a hard time between past and present tenses... :3

Enjoy! (KRISPY LAYS IS SO REAL)

 

Oh and here is a picture of Lay pouting~

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Awww >///< No wonder Kris can't resist Lay hehehe

Foreword

Yixing excuses himself from the room with promises to come back.

Kris starts to feel more and more sick. “Maybe I shouldn’t have asked Yixing to sing. I want him more now. I’m going to confess. If he rejects me or finds me weird, I can blame my fever...” thought Kris, thought Kris’ fever.

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BabybeMine #1
Chapter 2: Who cares about grammars if you could write this adorable fanfic T T
Those gifs made me letting out dying whale noises my kray feels
Areumda #2
kraaaaaaaaaaay
double-oh-sehun #3
AW CUUUUTE! :D I really liked this ^^ omg I forgot that Yixing played guitar! Hah I keep finding things in common with him just out of the blue, and now I can add guitar playing to the list ^^ I wanna duet with him~
double-oh-sehun #4
LAY POUTING!!! :D so cute. I want to kiss himmmm
YooHee_SoneTic #5
I like this fiction!! It is really cute^_^ Can I ask your permission to translate First Day Together into Vietnamese please? i promise to keep your credit and link it to your story :D
sekaiEXO #6
really cute !!
Nara1214 #7
^_^ so adorable
ing #8
the unicorn plushieeeeeeee! omg I love this ≧▽≦
taemspenus #9
SHO CUTE!?
JongKeybby #10
SO CUTE OMG
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