Chapter 4: This fic too short .. And i want more .. Bout the kiss its romantic and i really2 like it but , like what i say this too short .. One more thing , i think you put more bout kiss .. Or maybe first night .. 8-)
Aw that was so cute!! I love Elvin <3
Hehe that sentence from Dongho really made me laugh xD the one about the chemicals in Eli's hair LOOOL.
Good job!
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