Alarm Clock

Description

Onew and Taemin have always been friends. They've gone through thick and thin together.

As the days go by, both start to realize what feelings they've been keeping hidden inside.

 

Hey guys, this is my first time trying to write fanfiction, so I apologize if my writing is dreadful >.<

I hope everyone enjoys!

Story poster made by C U T E&M I N E poster shop! ^^

Foreword

 

“Don’t ing touch me.”

 

Onew cringed away from Taemin, fearful of angering the younger man any further. The maknae sat on the couch with his face turned in the opposite direction. Blood trickled from his lip down to his chin, tainting the loose strands from his messy hair that were sticking to his face. He was livid.

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KRSTNE
#1
Aaww poor thing.. Dubu would never hurt anyone like that on purpose, and Taemin knows that!
I really like this.. And I really like the way you write. <3 ^w^
Emmauk26
#2
OMO, poor dubu; come on Tae, you know he'd never hurt someone on purpose, especially one of you guys, he couldn't do that; I love that him and Minho are best friends and that he knows how Taemin feels about Onew; I also love that their not mad at Onew and can see that it was just an accident, and are trying to comfort him, knowing how much it's hurting him to know that he caused someone pain; I hope that they make up soon; can't wait for more, really love this; update really really soon. <3 <3
Eyagibba
#3
i like this already
DimestoreNovelist
#4
its a good start! :D
Emmauk26
#5
love it great job, and it was Onew that hurt Taemin, poor Onew he must feel terrible, poor Taemin with a cut lip and swollen face; but why wasn't Taemin moving when Onew nudged him? I really hope that Key not gonna be too pissed and doesn't be mean to Onew, after all it was just an accident and Onew feels bad enough, Jjong can vouch for that; I wonder what Onew will do to make it up to Taemin, can't wait for more, update really soon. ;-D
Emmauk26
#6
OMO, what happened, did Taemin hurt Onew? if so why would he do that; OMO, I can't wait to find out what happened, really love OnTae so I hope that all's gonna be ok with them; update really soon. ;-P