The Ex Factor

Description

 

PLOT:  The main character Jasmina is upset when her boyfriend breaks up with her so that he can join a new kpop group called Exo M. throughout this she continues to reside in California when one day Lay comes back for an SM Town Concert. Former passion is rekindled and Jasmina finds she is unable to make certain decisions. This story may have multiple points of views. I’m still working on that. I want you guys to actually have a story to read. As much as people enjoy the I think it’s pointless without a good story to back it up. Jasmina and Lay are the main characters.

 

JASMINA:Quirky and hot-tempered, she keeps any man on their toes. She’s trying to make it big in California but is down on her luck. After the break-up with Lay, she is currently with her boyfriend Hyun who isn’t exactly satisfying her ually. She runs Urban Arts with her friend Jessica.

 

LAY: After making it into the group Exo-M, Lay left Jasmina so that he could pursue his career.  While he was with Jasmina he was much more caring. Now is somewhat cocky and thinks now that he’s a celebrity he can have whatever he wants. He also tries desperately to get Jasmina back when he runs into her.

 

HYUN: Jasmina’s current boyfriend. He’s kind of a lazy bum and doesn’t really satisfy her. He seems to care less on just about everything unless it has something to do with him. He is 5’10 and has short and shaggy black hair.

 

JESSICA: Jasmina’s best friend and roommate. She acts as the go between for her and lay. She also runs the group Urban Arts with Jasmina.

 

OTHER CHARACTERS: Exo-M members. Mary, Thuan, Dalee, Maddie, Lysa (all members of a group that Jasmina and Jessica run together.)

Foreword

 

THE FOREWORD

Jasmina’s POV

“How dare you touch me!” I screamed as I slapped his hands away. He staggered slightly backwards but that didn’t stop him from continuing towards me. “Get away from me!” He said nothing at my remarks and just continued his steady yet fierce pace. I shook my head in defiance and in a failed attempt to get rid of all the mixed emotions I was feeling at the moment. He softly smiled as he neared closer and closer. Not a smirk, or anything sinister….but a genuine smile and that’s what scared me the most. That smile froze me in place. I could now feel his breath on my face and chills ran down my back as the hairs on my neck stood up; I was scared

CloudyJT
The chapter that I'm working on now I think is going to be the last one. Thanks for reading everyone!

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gealine_pac
#1
Chapter 11: This story is so FRIGGIN' SWEET!
jongty #2
Chapter 11: Enjoyed it sooo much!
CloudyJT
#3
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!!!!!
Little-Red
#4
THE BEST ENDING~ <3
and yeah, THIS JUST MADE ME LOVE LAY MORE~ :D
Little-Red
#5
“Ready for everything.”

---> I LOVE THIS LINE~ <3
Little-Red
#6
Suddenly I lost words and felt a sudden ache in my chest. His plane was gone.

---> SRSLY~ T^T
WAE?!??!?!?! T^T
Little-Red
#7
Suddenly I lost words and felt a sudden ache in my chest. His plane was gone.

---> SRSLY~ T^T
WAE?!??!?!?! T^T
Little-Red
#8
WHUUUUT?! T^T
YIXING! ARE YOU SRSLY LEAVING?!
AGAIN?! T^T
Little-Red
#9
HOHO~ THE PANDA BOY LIKES JESSICA?! XD
and yeah~ THE UNICORN'S BEING YYYYY AGAIN~
Little-Red
#10
That man sure confused the hell out of me.

---> u just dunno how he CONFUSES me as well~ XD