Remorse Of Amour

Description

This story is inspired from  "All Lies" or "전부 거짓말" song, by B.A.P. The lyrics were just so sad, and I just had to make a story out of it. Hopefully it's not disappointing. Since Daehyun played a major part in this song, I'll make him the main character. And this is only going to be one shot. Because I was confused who to pair him with, I left the OC unnamed. Her figure is pretty much like the girl on the poster. (It's Ayumi Hamasaki, btw)

PS: Personally, I think the man in the song is really a bastard LOL. Those who have read the lyrics will understand. Kekeke. But it is forgiven because of Daehyun's sweet voice.

Foreword

We didn't say anything as the rain starting to pour down. The thunder echoed throughout the city, and she jerked. She was always scared of thunder. I wanted to comfort her, but she took a step back when I took one forward. "Honey, please---"

"Don't call me that," she cut my line. She stuttered, "I... I don't want to hear it from you. Not anymore." Her already swollen eyes began to trickled yet another tear. Or is it just the rain?

The cold night wind caught up to us, but we didn't move an inch. I was thinking for some words--- Anything that would bring her closer to me. But I didn't know what to say. I didn't know how to apologize. Seeing her tears made me feel guiltier and guiltier, added more burden on my shoulder, again and again, until I my feet couldn't hold it and I feel like could collapse anytime.

Why?

Why did this have to happen? Give me another chance. Turn back the time and let me undo my mistake...

Comments

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Hequella #1
OHMYGOD. This is so touching! And honestly making them die seems like the best ending~
WRITE MORE!!!
tae_amo
#2
Woah.....so they will meet up in heaven??? FANTASTIC!!! Awesome story.....
Joonivy #3
thank u, you guys :')
krisydew #4
i really love this story and your writing style! too bad that they died but i guess that is one of the reasons why the story is so amazing.
iRAWRzX3
#5
awww, this made me cry! T__T but great story!~
x-azmariia-x #6
Among all of the fiction which were inspired by "All lies", it's your story that I Love the most.
Seriously you make me cry so much x).
I can't handle when people die but It's Ok x) I love the writting, I also love the characters.
The love and pain That Daehyun and the girl shared was absolutely beautiful.

Sorry for the mistakes, french reader here =) but I had the need to leave a comment.
Cellywelly
#7
...Y U KILL THEM. ;_;
But this. This was amazing. D: I really enjoyed it.