░blooming roses {open}

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Welcome to ░blooming roses, where stories get reviewed carefully and honestly. Being aspiring writers, we all want to be better in writing and would want someone to say their honest opinions about the story without being too harsh. Hopefully, I'm here to do that. I'm going to be reading your stories and I'm going to state my opinions about it. My criteria is found in the Foreword and if you want me to review your story, go and request! <3

- Shiro-chan

Foreword

 

░Rules

 

  1. Subscribe to the shop so you'll get the update.
  2. I would rather like it if you be patient while I review your story. It might take a week or two for me to finish it.
  3. I wouldn't like it if you bash me for being honest. It wasn't me who asked to review your story anyway so all the blame's on you.
  4. Rated M stories are allowed to be reviewed.
  5. BoyxBoy and GirlxGirl stories are allowed (and I mean, REALLY allowed lol)
  6. Do not unsubscribe after you received the work because it's rude.
  7. Comment below after you request and receive the review.
  8. You must credit to the specific reviewer, the shop and add the link on your foreword or description.
  9. PM the authors if you want to cancel the review within 3 days.

 

░Rubric - Click here!

 

░Request Form - Click here!

 

░Beta Request - Click here!

 

░Pending

  1. The Boy Next Door - iiJ-RockLoverXD - review
  2. Heartful Voice - baesueji - beta
  3. Guitar - Eternity - review

 

░Finished

  1. You were never been mine - Eternity - review
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ExoticFairy #1
I've subscribed and requested ^^
NghiTranVo #2
Request done
LadyofReincarnation #3
I had requested^^
Kim_Hanyu #4
Requested~
maeanneda123 #5
I requested... :)
Eternity #6
I read it at school :D So, I can't say everything I want on english, so I'll just say this: I translate my story with google translate... and after that I edit it with my pour english :D that's why there's a moments that you maybe can't understand..
about the ellipsis. You know, I put them on purpose.. because it's like when someone talk he wants to say something but stops at the last moment and say something wlse.. I wanted to show that.
and about their names: I switch it from Youngwoon to Kangin and from Jungsoo to Leeteuk, because of their meanings. 'kangin' means strong, so for Jusgsoo he's strong, he's the person that can keep live without him by his side. 'leeteuk' means 'special', for Kangin he's something special that was a gift for him from Heaven, someone that brings light in his life. That's why I use it. I though that it's more funnier and misteryc (I don't know if it's even a word :D) if the reader found him/herself why I write it that way. I though: "Well, if they made SuJu contest, they should know this, why I don't made it." I guess it didn't turn out like I want ^^'
Soo, I'm trying really hard to learn english more and I want to became better with it. I promise I'll became beter :)
Thanks for being harsh :D I like it, that was what I want... you know, people can't learn if no one tell them where's their mistakes :D
Once again, thank you, I'll request soon again, I'm starting to like it :) :D
^^
Eternity #7
wow, thanks... I read it only to 'flow' because I have to go to school but I'll continue when I'm back... so, I'll tell you.. the 'She' is the Moon... it'll be annoying for me to write 'The Moon' as every 2. word -.- that's why I write it She and no she...
about the POV... the whole thing at chapter 1. is from Kangin's POV... I don't see why you think I changed it, there's nothing like that :/ Chapter 2. is Leeteuk's POV....
'kay, I'll continue when I'm back :)
BubblesSweet #8
I requested! I think...
InTheBLINKofAnEye #9
Hey, can I become a reviewER? I'd like to help you out around the story. =)
Eternity #10
i've requested two of my fics :)
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