The Rubrics ^^

░blooming roses {open}

 

░Shiro-chan's Criteria

Title {5/5}

- Is your title eye-catching? Does your title make me want to read your story right away? Does your title spark curiosity in me?

 

Description {10/10}

- Is your description written well that it doesn't spoil your whole story? 

 

Foreword {10/10}

- Is your foreword interesting? Is the preview of your story enough to make me go and read it?

 

Plot {25/25}

- Is your plot too cliche? Is your plot original? Was your story really amazing and makes me want to recommend it to the people here right away?

 

Punctuation, Grammar, Vocabulary, and Spelling {30/30}

- Are your punctuations correct? Is your grammar tolerable? Is your vocabulary limited? Is your spelling just fine?

 

Writing Mechanics {20/20}

How well do you write your story? Do you switch point-of-views or do you stick to one?

 

Flow of the Story {15/15}

- Did you pace your story perfectly or was it all too rushed?

 

Creativity {20/20}

- Was your story really fun to read? Are there story twists that makes me smile or laugh or even cry? 

 

Over-all: 135/135

 

 

 

░Femireu's Criteria

 

Title: (--/5)
if it takes my attention or not. And the title should relate the story perfectly because it's the first thing your viewers see.

Poster & background: (--/5)
Some of you may don't have a Poster or Background, it's okay I just won't be judging you on this.

Description & foreword: (--/10)
Are they telling the whole story that make your story become cliché? Or they make me want to click 'Next>>'?

Plot and Originality: (--/10)
Character: (--/10)
Flow: (--/10)
Ending: (--/10)

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/ Vocabulary: (--/30)
I'll go easy on your grammar, spelling and vocabulary if english isn't your major language but your punctuation can be a big deal for me.

Overall enjoyment: (--/10)

Total: (---/100)

 

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ExoticFairy
#1
I've subscribed and requested ^^
NghiTranVo #2
Request done
LadyofReincarnation
#3
I had requested^^
Kim_Hanyu
#4
Requested~
maeanneda123
#5
I requested... :)
Eternity
#6
I read it at school :D So, I can't say everything I want on english, so I'll just say this: I translate my story with google translate... and after that I edit it with my pour english :D that's why there's a moments that you maybe can't understand..
about the ellipsis. You know, I put them on purpose.. because it's like when someone talk he wants to say something but stops at the last moment and say something wlse.. I wanted to show that.
and about their names: I switch it from Youngwoon to Kangin and from Jungsoo to Leeteuk, because of their meanings. 'kangin' means strong, so for Jusgsoo he's strong, he's the person that can keep live without him by his side. 'leeteuk' means 'special', for Kangin he's something special that was a gift for him from Heaven, someone that brings light in his life. That's why I use it. I though that it's more funnier and misteryc (I don't know if it's even a word :D) if the reader found him/herself why I write it that way. I though: "Well, if they made SuJu contest, they should know this, why I don't made it." I guess it didn't turn out like I want ^^'
Soo, I'm trying really hard to learn english more and I want to became better with it. I promise I'll became beter :)
Thanks for being harsh :D I like it, that was what I want... you know, people can't learn if no one tell them where's their mistakes :D
Once again, thank you, I'll request soon again, I'm starting to like it :) :D
^^
Eternity
#7
wow, thanks... I read it only to 'flow' because I have to go to school but I'll continue when I'm back... so, I'll tell you.. the 'She' is the Moon... it'll be annoying for me to write 'The Moon' as every 2. word -.- that's why I write it She and no she...
about the POV... the whole thing at chapter 1. is from Kangin's POV... I don't see why you think I changed it, there's nothing like that :/ Chapter 2. is Leeteuk's POV....
'kay, I'll continue when I'm back :)
BubblesSweet #8
I requested! I think...
InTheBLINKofAnEye
#9
Hey, can I become a reviewER? I'd like to help you out around the story. =)
Eternity
#10
i've requested two of my fics :)