do you love me?

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    On planet vegeta two saiyan parents had a baby girl. This baby however is different from them. She is gentle and doesnt fight. Every one liked her cuz she was so cute and innocent while others wanted her dead. When freeza took conrtol of planet vegeta her parents sent her and her brothers to earth so they can be safe. Years later the same baby and her older brother Goku are living just like any other earthing. The prince of their race is with them to. They go to school like regular people. But when Goku starts having feeling for some one but loves some one else how will he manage these feeling for his crush and his love.

 

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 Goku: full fledged saiyan. Raised on earth by his Grandpa Gohan. Has a little sister.  Kind hearted but Evil when you hurt his sister or make her cry. Over protective of his sister cuz of some events that happened to her.


Anime Girl - cute99 photoharuka/ saiyan name Tora: full fledge saiyan. Goku's little sister. not a fighter like her two brothers. Gentle. very shy. super smart. Named after her father's friend who died. very clueless about erted stuff. Likes vegeta secretly.

 vegeta.jpgVegeta: prince of all saiyans. friends with Goku.  Doesnt know that Haruka has a crush on him. popular with the ladies. short tempered. Misses his old life as a warrior. loves to spar with goku and haruka even though she gets mad when they ask hercute anime boy 5    Zorn: a full fledged saiyan who survived the explosion of his planet. works for frieza. cold hearted when you meet him but nice and dorky when you know him better. clumsy loves to eat anything you give him. is a kpop idol who told s that he is a saiyan. gone from his idol life for a short while. wants to find the right saiyan girl.type someone who is very gentle yet fierce.


            Radditz: Goku's and Tora's older brother. Works for freeza. Secretly knows why his sister wasn't born the way most saiyans are born. Like Goku will hurt anyone that hurts his sister or makes her cry. Good at cooking.


                                                                                 minor characters  chichi: love's goku. will do anything to get him to pay attention to only her. ie. Hate's Haruka.               and z fighters: tien chaitzu yamcha and krillin. Goku's and haruka's friend. yamcha like's haruka but will never have a chance with her cuz of goku. tien is very quiet. krillin: love's 18 and hate's the way goku is because of chichi.

 

 

Foreword

i'm a big dbz fan and i'm gonna put this story on fanfiction .net. now thanks to the character's i spoiled some of it. oh FYI their names are puns off of vegetables.

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Nekluna
#1
Chapter 1: I couldnt even finish the first chapter.
The colored text sentences are really annoying for the eyes.
Nekluna
#2
Your foreword has a lot of misspelled words. Better correct them.
Otherwise people will think you wrote down everything on the buss on a whim during 3 minutes. The impression also get sporadic when the character portraits are very different in style and that several of them dont even have portraits, for some reason.
The Usa version of the japanese names from Dragonball is a bad joke to the original creator. You should use the original names instead.
Sounds better and more thought out.
Teddy53 #3
So this is the story you've been keeping from me seeing sneaky sneaky