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Lu Han's POV
It's been two years. Two years since ~~~~~ died. My love. These two years had been a living hell. We had plans. Plans for the future... plans for now.
My life now consists of flying in and out of Korea and China. Study. Work. No more love. I had lost my love, I don't even know when.
It's been two years. No sign of ~~~~~'s corpse which was stolen on the day of her funeral. I have nothing to remember her by. She's gone from my life... but I will find her. I will search the whole world finding her. I will find her. Even if I waste my life doing so. Even if all that remains, is a pile of bones.
I don't care. I want her, I need her.
We were meant to be married.
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~Flashback~
"Yes, Luhan-oppa! Yes!"
I jumped up and hugged her in my arms. ~~~~~ was crying, I was laughing. "I love you. Wo ai ni. Saranghae."
She giggled. "Nado saranghaeyo. I love you. Wo ai ni, Luhan." Her accented Chinese was so cute; it always put a smile on my face and made my heart race like crazy.
I pulled away from her and slowly slipped the sparkly diamond ring onto her slim finger. She smiled. I kissed her softly, on the lips. I whispered, "You and I... once you're out of highschool, we're going to get married. Promise?"
She nodded. "Araso, I promise. Saranghaeyo, Luhan-oppa."
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~Present Time~
I looked down at that same diamond ring that was sitting on my palm. I clenched it tightly in my hand and kissed it. "Saranghae ~~~~~. I will love you forever. I will go halfway around the world to find your body. I don't care why you did the things you did. I love you."
Though I said that, I can't help but have mixed feelings. I hated her, for getting HIV, yet I loved her with all my life. Why did she betray me? Why did she take off this ring that marked our promise?
Who is the person who destroyed our relationship... who destroyed her?
Luhan's POV End
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kyungseu on says about chapter 35:
I WANT TO CRY BUT NO I KENOT BECAUSE MY DAD IS NEXT TO ME ;A;
your story is different from the others. I like it :3
AloOoOolE on says about chapter 35:
A really different fic, in a good way ofc. I live ur imagination about things ^__^
Even I thought the end 'll be something else, but I still like it ♡ ~~
Thanx ~ I'll look forward ur other fic ~
infinite7myungsooL on says about chapter 35:
Beautiful story :') it's so sad but i love it :')
aigooooo on says about chapter 35:
it would've been cute if Kai actually knew that she was the clone and loved her too ^^ good story though
kpop_fan_1998 on says about chapter 35:
Omg. That was propobly one of the best sad fics I've ever read on AFF.
But I feel sad for the Clone. Just imagine your lover thinks you"re someone else. The fact that your lover 'loves' you back becomes insignificant if he thinks youre someone else...
rlab4ever on says about chapter 35:
You made me cry!!! But then my annoying and cheerful brother came in which ruined my mood again!!! And I have the same question as KimShinYeong94, did he actually think that the girl was the original or clone?
KimShinYeong94 on says about chapter 35:
Can u please tell me who he actually think that girl is ? Did he actually thought that the girl was the clone or the real one ? Please answer me :( you left it hanging there <///3.
NonfatMilk on says about chapter 35:
WOW. i never expected to cry at the 35th chapter,just..WOW.
it was truly amazing.just WOW. i can't say anything right but WOW and "THEY DIED TOGETHER!!*INSERT LOUD SOBS HERE* "
All i'm saying is that....your story is .WOW. lol
it was rockin' :)
Cheonsa on says about chapter 35:
.....
What is my life about?
LiarLiarYoureOnFire on says about chapter 35:
I'm so sad it's over. I have so many doubts and thoughts on Kai's condition. I can't believe Luhan and Lee died... ;—;
I'm all depressed now. I wanna cry but I can't. ;A;
I wanna leave a longer comment but I can't. ;A;
I'm sad since this is over. I really loved reading this, I always waited for your updates. ;—;
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