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by DarkFallenAngel
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lovetriangle
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kai
luhan
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Your POV (The Clone)
I looked at the cute bunny rabbit ears. I watched as couples tried them on, and took selcas. I wonder if Kai and I would ever be able to do this, go out, as a couple; girlfriend and boyfriend, have fun, and do what normal couples do.
I picked up the cat ears and tried them on. I turned to the mirror and smiled. Kai would look so cute in them.
Did Lee ~~~~~ ever got the chance to do this with Kai? If so, I envy her. I really do. If I had the chance, I would tell her how much I hate her, face to face. If ever.
Your POV End
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Luhan's POV
I was walking past a shop, when I noticed a familiar female figure inside it, through the shop window. My eyes widened. It was ~~~~~. She was looking at a mirror with cat ears on, smiling widely.
Even though my rational side told me that it could never be ~~~~~, my emotional side kept hope.
I quickly ran to the entrance, but was almost knocked over by a couple. They apologized, bowed and walked off. I quickly rushed into the shop, to where I had seen ~~~~~, but there was no one there.
I sighed and shook me head. How stupid can I get? ~~~~~'s dead. Suho must've just mistaken another girl for ~~~~~. He must have. If she was still alive, why would she not come home? Why would she forget the promise we made?
Luhan's POV End
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kyungseu on says about chapter 35:
I WANT TO CRY BUT NO I KENOT BECAUSE MY DAD IS NEXT TO ME ;A;
your story is different from the others. I like it :3
AloOoOolE on says about chapter 35:
A really different fic, in a good way ofc. I live ur imagination about things ^__^
Even I thought the end 'll be something else, but I still like it ♡ ~~
Thanx ~ I'll look forward ur other fic ~
infinite7myungsooL on says about chapter 35:
Beautiful story :') it's so sad but i love it :')
aigooooo on says about chapter 35:
it would've been cute if Kai actually knew that she was the clone and loved her too ^^ good story though
kpop_fan_1998 on says about chapter 35:
Omg. That was propobly one of the best sad fics I've ever read on AFF.
But I feel sad for the Clone. Just imagine your lover thinks you"re someone else. The fact that your lover 'loves' you back becomes insignificant if he thinks youre someone else...
rlab4ever on says about chapter 35:
You made me cry!!! But then my annoying and cheerful brother came in which ruined my mood again!!! And I have the same question as KimShinYeong94, did he actually think that the girl was the original or clone?
KimShinYeong94 on says about chapter 35:
Can u please tell me who he actually think that girl is ? Did he actually thought that the girl was the clone or the real one ? Please answer me :( you left it hanging there <///3.
NonfatMilk on says about chapter 35:
WOW. i never expected to cry at the 35th chapter,just..WOW.
it was truly amazing.just WOW. i can't say anything right but WOW and "THEY DIED TOGETHER!!*INSERT LOUD SOBS HERE* "
All i'm saying is that....your story is .WOW. lol
it was rockin' :)
Cheonsa on says about chapter 35:
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What is my life about?
LiarLiarYoureOnFire on says about chapter 35:
I'm so sad it's over. I have so many doubts and thoughts on Kai's condition. I can't believe Luhan and Lee died... ;—;
I'm all depressed now. I wanna cry but I can't. ;A;
I wanna leave a longer comment but I can't. ;A;
I'm sad since this is over. I really loved reading this, I always waited for your updates. ;—;
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