Sherlock's Partner

Description

With the help of the beautiful Jessica, rookie detective Jonghyun is able to solve the first big case of his career. They decide to team up and solve many more cases, despite the concern of chief inspector Tiffany. In this partnership, a mutual affection is developed. But how long can this love last, when one is living and one is a ghost?

Foreword

Story genre(s): A romantic tragedy, with a sprinkle of drama, I guess? IDK, It's my first time writing anything like this, so please forgive me if it's bleh-worthy.

This was written as a one-shot contest entry for unbroken's contest: Captured Memories, but it ended up kind of long. Make that reaaaallly long. Sorry about that.

Looking at it now, I realize that maybe this would have been better in multiple chapters, or a little longer. But since it's so long already, I think I'm just going to have to leave it as it is. If I don't make the cut for getting into the contest (which I probably won't, TT.TT everyone's entries are so good), I'll probably go back and find a way to edit this and make it longer. And more appealing. It looks bland, doesn't it?

 

Loosely inspired by SHINee's Sherlock music video. If you haven't watched it, here's a quick summary:

Team SHINee decides to go to a dusty old museum and try their hands at solving the mystery of the missing jewelry. With the help of a mysterious yet gorgeous ghost that appears and disappears, dropping a few clues in the process, SHINee is able to find the missing jewelry in a secret room behind a wall. The 'New York News' headline reads "SHINee finds the jewelry".

My summary skills are good, no? (Seriously, check out the vid if you have time. This Shawol commands you.)

 

Now we get to the actual foreword:

 



 

The note that was left behind:

Over this past month, you've made me feel more comfortable and happy than I've ever felt, even when I was still alive. Meeting you has evoked emotions from me that I never thought I was capable of. I love you. I love you, but I can't hold you back from what you deserve. Thank you for giving me this wonderful experience of being in love. Just being able to spend the little time we had together was enough for me, and I hope that it was enough for you.  Now, wipe up your tears for me, don't cry. Breathe, and smile. My time is over, and you've got a life to live.

- Your partner

 


tillynilly
guys i made it into the contest! hopefully, i can pass the next round, but again, its a tough call..

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
ShineeStar4ever #1
Chapter 1: Hehe please make a sequel
I want to see tiffany and jonghyuns relationship develop <3
cassiopeia06
#2
Chapter 1: Oh my gosh ! The story is so damn GOOD ! I felt bad for JongSica, but you know what happens after when a ghost accomplished something that's keeping it moving on. JongFany my OTP ! So glad Jong gets a happy ending with Fany ! <3
taenniie #3
I really love this story though my heart aches for the JongSica part. keke~ :))))
hae_ki #4
haha... a cute way of karma for fany XD
Inspiration #5
I like Jongfany (;
Tzarista #6
why did she have to go ... she spent about decades on earth already ...
nerdscandy #7
aww :( jongsicaaaaa wahhh :(
but it's ok! i ship jeti :D