Sunflower

Description

         " While I looked up at the sun in the powder blue sky patterned with white cotton balls, my hand reached down to pat my best friend's stomach to wake him up. His first day of summer vacation had finally arrived. The boy squirmed under my gentle pats, indicating that he was too tired to get up. Watching him incited a lively chuckle to escape from my lips.

          "Jonghyun, wake up." I whispered close into his ears. So close that I could spot the ear fuzz on his ear lobe. With that, he shivered and his eyes fluttered open. In return to his obedience, I flashed him a smile.

          "Hm?" His voice was groggy and unsteady. Of course the one man who convinced me to sneak out of the hospital at 2 o'clock in the morning and wait with him until the sun came up would be the first of the two of us to fall asleep. "

- Sunflower

Foreword

This was...Hard. LOL. I was actually tweeting about my excitement of writing a fanfic for the first time for the public to see. If you want to see my noobish twitter it's @kimmysaranghae. Just type in Kimmy Pratt c: Dear gosh, I was debating on whether I should make another chapter because it is honestly calling out to me. But it's always new nice to see a story end at a critical moment. xD! But idk. I guess maybe if this turns out well, I'll do it? Not sure though, Lol! I hope you enjoy it!

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soonja
#1
Yeah,I agree with everyone. You just need to put some mark or something to avoid people to be confused C:
Besides that I wanted to say "d'awwww" all the time reading this, beautiful <3
taemspenus #2
That was so fluffay!! >w<
enishekey
#3
Taemin hates MInho? oo yeah... i love that. LOL
you have a nice plot, but the transition between one setting between the other is quiet confusing.
i was like 'what happen?', and i have to reread again just to make sure i wasn't missing any line or something.

anyway, i like the fluffiness in this story :)
keep up the good work
phiiee #4
AWWWW this is such a sweet story <3
And uhh, this is my personal opinion okay?
The transition part where Key was in the hospital to Key already discharged was a bit confusing? Cause there were no signs or anything. I'd put a line or something to mark it.
And the font is rather mindboggling cause it's all curvy... I didn't really like it :S
But besides that the plot was so nice and fluffy <3 I even love the part where you made Taemin hate Minho!!!
HELL YEAH!
Hahha xD
Looking forward to future Jongkey fics from you!
persona-x #5
FLUFFFY~ TY FOR THE UPDATE! ( ̄▽ ̄)b