EXO - MAMA (worktitle) [Hiatus]

Description

Based on Exo’s new song MAMA. Fantasy. . That is about all there is to it. The story is mine, the people are not (sadly), their characters are made up, because I do not really know them, I just got really inspired by their music video.

I write excruciating slow, so I am warning you, potential reader, this may take a year… or two, I don’t really know. I may even change everything halfway through the story, delete everything and start again. I tend to do those things. Mianhe in advance.

This is the Korean MV:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KH6ZwnqZ7Wo&feature=my_liked_videos&list=LLNOYVGreh74MWhCKgCA9gkA

This is the Chinese MV:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eQ9sTtXSDwo&feature=BFa&list=LLNOYVGreh74MWhCKgCA9gkA

Foreword

This might not even be in the story or I might change it, but it is supposed to happen somewhere at the end. I tend to writhe separate scenes and connect them later on.

 

 

I tried not to move because I did not want him to stop playing. The music washed over me and I listened.

The emotions these notes inflicted on me were so raw I almost cried were I stood. Eventually I could not hold the tears anymore and just let them stream down my face as I watched his beautiful figure behind the piano. He seemed in pain. Resisting the urge to walk up to him, I let him finish his song and stepped back to leave before he noticed me.

“Don’t go.”

I froze when his faint whisper reached my ears. His eyes were still closed and for a slight moment I thought I had imagined it, but then he spoke again, louder this time.

“I’m not done yet.”

Quietly, because I did not want to disturb the silence, I walked over to the couch and sat down. As soon as I breathed out, he began playing again.

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If anyone finds typos or weird sentences, please tell me, because I am trying to improve my English. Thank You!

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Hikari2317 #1
Chapter 15: shouldn't it be cheonsa (천사)?
not chansu?

anyways, good fic!
Hikari2317 #2
Chapter 15: shouldn't it be cheonsa (천사)?
not chansu?

anyways, good fic!
unprimrose
#3
I expect you're Exotic so please view this post!
Thank you!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/399187
HyunAeJjang
#4
Chapter 16: Lol... Lay can't understand what they are saying.. Please update soon! ^^
SiaShin
#5
Lol Lay, calm yo x)
zero_zumi
#6
Next chapter..next chapter..next chapter...!
chaanbaaek
#7
woah this chapter is light XD and i liked it~
loving their interactions it's so humorous (or i'm just weird)

update soon! <3
Shugosora
#8
Awww yeahhh update! 8'D

absvjhsbv why cliffhanger, why?! ;A; Awesome chapter! >8D Can't wait until the next one~! (X
chaanbaaek
#9
altho it's only a brief taekai moment.... i'm so friggin sad rn omg
zero_zumi
#10
FINALLY......i can read this...~

Update soon~^^