I Like Him

Revenge (Under editing)

 

Ren Pov

was he about to kiss me at moment? I still thinking about what happen at the moment, his face is so close to mine when I open my eyes, Is I’m not open my eyes, He will kiss me??? but why would he kiss me? Did he like me?? It can’t be!!! Aish!! Ren, what are you thinking??

“Ren, Ren” I heard he call me

“oh... what?”

“What are you thinking?  I already call you like many time...”

“oh..oh.. nothing, what is it?”

“We’re here” he said and drags me off the bus

“Where are we?” I said and look around after get off bus

“just come with me, you will know!!” he said and smile while drag me with him

we walk for a while then he lead me to a filed with green grass and some yellow flowers are around there and it’s have a tree

“Wow, such a nice view!!” I exclaimed!!

he smile and walk until reach the tree and sit down there and I just follow him

“How come you find this place? it’s far from city though” I ask and turn to him

“it’s near my grandparent house so my grandpa used to walk me here, it’s feel really nice and I always come here” he said

“oh..... It’s such really nice place” I said again and smile

 

Minhyun pov

“you like here?” I ask her and she just nodded

No wonder who wouldn’t like this place....

“It’s my favorite place and I only bring special person for me to here” I use cheesy line, well I watch movie and it how to make girl fall for you, just copy the actor

Then I saw her blush, did she already like me? And I feel happy for this... maybe because my plan work but I don’t feel really like that... what is this feeling...

“eerr...then... I’m special... for..you?” she said shyly, wow she is cute, did I just say she is cute again? stupid minhyun!!

“hmm.... yeah...” I said

“Really? but we just meet....” she said looking away with a red face, it’s like I do confession

 

Ren pov

“I just feel that you are special...” he said and lay down to the grass

“oh....” well.. I feel the same too but I can’t even say that... stupid me

I look at him and he close his eyes, look like he is sleeping, well... his face is handsome and peaceful when sleep like that, his lip is so perfect.. wha What are you doing Choi Minki!! you’re guy not girl like your outside is!! Stop thinking!! Stop thinking!! I mess my own hair

“hey.. Ren” he called me

“oh.. what?” I said

“your hair is messy”

“oh..” I nodded and tidy it

“let me tidy it for you” he said and I allow it but he is not tidy my hair but mess it more then he laugh and run

“YAH!!! you are not going anywhere, Hwang Minhyun!! come back here” I shout at chase him...

It’s gonna be a fun day!!!

 

Evening.......

 

“Hey, thank  for today” I said when we already arrived my house

“you’re welcome” he said and smile as usual

“Good bye” I said and kiss his cheek, well I don’t know why I do that too, then turn to run but he grip my wrist and kiss my forehead, I wide my eyes and stunned there, don’t know what to do then he let me go

“ good bye” he said and run off

I smile and walk in my house....

That night....

“Mrs. Kim and he even kiss my forehead for good bye this evening and I feel like I like it... and why I like it and I feel so happy everytime around him, did I like him?” I told the whole story to Mrs kim cause I keep asking myself the same question that Do I like him? well after hours I still can’t find answer and can’t stay still either...

“yes, you like that person” she said and smile while pat my hair, my real hair not wig

“Really?” I ask again with my curious face

“yes, now go to bed you have school tomorrow too. good night” she said so I lay on the bed and hug my bear

“So I like him” I smile and close my eyes for sleep.

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sorry for really late update cause I have some personal problem and the site is down when I update too.. but now I updated!!!! hope you enjoy it!! ^^  

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luludeer7_abcdEXO88m
#1
Chapter 2: This is a nice story authornim!! Minren <3
Yara-chan #2
Chapter 20: Loved this~<3
stanwendy
#3
Chapter 8: Hah. Serves you right, Minhyun XP
stanwendy
#4
Chapter 7: OMG.. I pity Ren... X3
nightStar
#5
congrats :)
MikeeMouse #6
Congratulations
BabyYixing
#7
Congrats!!
BarbieTiffany
#8
Despite the grammar issues, don't ever give up writing okay? You have potential, to be honest. You can read English books to help your English and widen your vocabulary. ^^ Anyway, congrats on the random feature!
kkai_otic
#9
Chapter 2: This story is great I tell you, and congratulation for the feature!! I hope this get edited soon or beta-ed, im sorry but I just cant continue reading it some are hard to understand but im gonna subscribe and anticipate for the edited version, GOODLUCK~^^
lovelyme23 #10
Congratulations!