My plan doesn't go really well

Revenge (Under editing)

 

A week later, Sunday morning

Ren Pov

it has been a week since I know Minhyun and I think my life is change, I feel that it’s more colorful, I always smile when I go to school and I feel happy alot round him. Does it mean I like him?? but I just know him.... does it the feeling like? I don’t know.... Suddenly my phone ringing and I smile when I saw his name on my screen

“oh, Minhyun ah~~” I answer the phone

“Hey, wanna hang out?”

“Hmm.. yeah~~”

“okay, I’m gonna pick you up in an hour ok?”

“yes...” I answer try to hide my excited

“see u soon then, bye”

“yeah.. bye~~” I said and hang up and run quickly to the bathroom

 

After shower..

“Which one should I wear?” I mumble to myself while dig in my giant clothespress, I already throw like hill of clothes out but I can’t find the good one.

‘Aish, just hang out with him, why is this hard?’ I think and groan out

“oh my lady, what are you looking for?” Mrs kim said, she is the old maid in the house, like since I was born and she know I’m boy and I’m so close to her

“I’m looking for a suit of clothes to hang out but just can’t find the right one” I sigh

“aigoo.. all this clothes are perfect on you” she said

“no, It doesn’t look so great” I protest, but why would I want to be great?

then I heard Mrs Kim giggles and said

“you hang out with someone you like huh?”

I feel my face hot again then I answer nervously also looking away from her

“N..o”

“you even blush, I know you like that person” she continue while picking clothes up

“who blush!!” I half shout now

she laugh and said while handing me the clothes

“stop protesting~~ wear this clothes, I know this will perfect”

“okay”

 

Now I’m waiting patiently for Minhyun with the clothes Mrs Kim prepared for me, a white skirt and pink shirt also a small jacket cause it’s cold.

“Hey, you wait for long?” I heard his voice, I look at the direct of voice

“oh.. not really... let’s go” I said and he just nod and walk along with me

The weather is pretty cold and I forget to bring my gloves so I rub my hand to make it more hotter. Minhyun look at me and smile then grab my hand and put it into his jacket, I wide my eyes

“you’re cold right? in here will be warmer and you don’t mind right?” he said without looking at me, I smile and nod, he giggles and we keep walking until reach a Coffee shop

“you want something hot ?”he said and look at me for respond and I just nod for it then he smile and pinch my cheek

“aigoo~~ you’re cute although u didn’t say anything cute, let’s go in”

I blush here so hard, he said I’m cute again... and I feel happy for it

we sit in a table after order

“your order is here sir” the waiter said and put down our hot chocolate

“thank” Minhyun said and smile, he is really nice guy, he always smiling

I grab the chocolate with both of my palm, it’s so warm!!

I drink it then when I put down my cup and look at minhyun, he laugh and I was confuse by his action

“what?” I ask him confusing

“you are childish, why you always have something on your face after eating or drinking?” he said and wipe my lip with his thumb, I really surprise with his action but just don’t do anything, I feel his thumb stop and it feel like the world is stop for the moment then maybe he realize what he doing, he take his thumb off quickly and look away

“sorry” he said awkwardly

“it’s okay” I said the same way with him, it was silent moment until he broke it

“hmm... we should get going now” I nod

 

When we were outside, he doesn’t hold my hand, I was unhappy for that but I can’t just hold his hand.

“Let’s go, the bus is here” he said and drag me

“where are we going?” I asked him

“it’s secret” he said and smile

 

after sit on the bus, I start feel sleepy cause we’re not talking so I just rest my head on the window then minhyun pull my head on his shoulder and still put his hand on my hair, I feel so comfortable with him everytime. I smile and close my eyes.

...........

Minhyun pov

I stare at Ren that just fall in sleep on my shoulder, I look at her eyes, nose then lip, those lip really attractive and so soft that feel so kissable I lend in, what am I doing I don’t know but I feel that those lip is calling for me then Ren open her eyes, I back off quickly

“I’m sorry to wake you up” I said while look away, just great minhyun!!

“oh.. it’s okay...” she said and look at the view outside the window

Omg... I nearly kiss her. What got into me!!!

I need to make her fall for me not me to fall for her!!! Its ruin my plan!! look like my plan doesn’t go really well

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luludeer7_abcdEXO88m
#1
Chapter 2: This is a nice story authornim!! Minren <3
Yara-chan #2
Chapter 20: Loved this~<3
stanwendy
#3
Chapter 8: Hah. Serves you right, Minhyun XP
stanwendy
#4
Chapter 7: OMG.. I pity Ren... X3
nightStar
#5
congrats :)
MikeeMouse #6
Congratulations
BabyYixing
#7
Congrats!!
BarbieTiffany
#8
Despite the grammar issues, don't ever give up writing okay? You have potential, to be honest. You can read English books to help your English and widen your vocabulary. ^^ Anyway, congrats on the random feature!
kkai_otic
#9
Chapter 2: This story is great I tell you, and congratulation for the feature!! I hope this get edited soon or beta-ed, im sorry but I just cant continue reading it some are hard to understand but im gonna subscribe and anticipate for the edited version, GOODLUCK~^^
lovelyme23 #10
Congratulations!