Chapter 2: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1471726/2'>rookie of the year</a></span>
Oh and update whenever you want ! I just noticed that it has been a minute since you write this so, as long as you feel good with it, take the time you want ! And if you stopped focusing on this, that is up to you as well ! No pressure or anything i just wanted to show my appreciation, do what you want to do.
Just know that if there was the option to upvote each chapter, i absolutely would !
Have a good day and night !
Chapter 2: Wow just looked at my comment after i posted it and i wrote a whole article didn't i ? XD
Sorry about that, maybe i shoul've broke it down ? Lol
Chapter 2: Hi ! How are you doing ? I don't comment often on anything i read because it's a bit difficult for me to, but i needed to comment to tell you how much i love your writing !
There might only be two chapters right now (prologue included) but you can tell good story-telling from the early parts of a story when you see it and that is exactly what i see here !
Your fluid writing style ,the way you chose to make the story flow, and the personalities you gave your characters (as of right now of course), are elements that make your story professional-looking in my eyes, and i promise i'm not exaggerating.
I'm in love with Sara and Jimin's relationship premise ! It's so beautiful and heartwarming, you can tell the deep, wholesome and mature way they love each other from their early stages. You managed to make my heart both flutter and ache in the little i've read of your story, and i thank you for it.
Also i can't not congratulate you on how official the article you wrote sounded ! It honestly could've fooled me ! I can't write official-sounding articles so even if it so happens to be something you're used to doing in real life or something, i'd still be impressed !
Even though i can't promise to comment often, i want you to know that wherever you want to take this story i'm fully supporting you ! This is your creative work and i just appreciate that you're sharing with us. Thank you.
I wish you well in whatever you're doing or want to do in your writings and in life. I hope you're well and safe. Take care !
P.S: is there something particular you'd want to be refered to by ? (Did i write that right ? It sounds off to me xD) I mean would want to be called by your name or a nickname or something else ? Or is "authornim" okay to use ? I know some authors don't like it so i'm asking first in case you don't either. My greeting sounded awkward when i wrote it. It sounded unpersonal XD
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