Perfection

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to me he was perfection his eyes his infamous smirk and it was as if he had been crafted by angels

kim jaejoong was perfect.....

Foreword

i at forword and summary

Name: Rose Preferred to be called Roe

age: 19

nationality: British

Personality: shy, short tempered gentle with alice slightly docile

description: black hair that is alittle under your shoulder, blue gray eyes pale skin 4 foot 9

 

name: jaejoong

age: (for storys sake) 23

 

Name: alice

age: 19

personality: very short tempered, loud, tom boyish and has a swearing problem

description: brown hair barely reaches her shoulders, slightly tanned skin and brown eyes

 

okay thats not my best but im still alittle nervous when it comes to publishing my writing even if its only on a website oh well fanfic number 2 starring kim jaejoong my latest kpop crush <3 comments are much appreciated <3 raven_the_stilldoll

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MadHatters_Mistress #1
<3 good story
MoonBender #2
its really good storyline <3
Raven_the_StillDoll #3
@mastermindrisz i'm gonna upload a better copy when i get the chance i just really wanted it to upload before i had to go to work
Hamsteriz #4
it's a good story. honestly, the plot is great. just that, i barely understood it.
punctuation is very important in writing, i hope you would use punctuation in the future. without it, the whole meaning will change.
i'm not good in grammar myself but there're many avoid-able mistake there ^~^
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