Man or a Monster

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Walking home on a lonely night, the only thing on Seungyoon's mind is getting into the cozy warmth of his bed before he catches bronchitis or breaks an ankle on the quickly gathering sleet.

What he doesn't know is that there are eyes watching him from the shadows - eyes that track him with intent, eye that belong to a manic, depraved mind...

Foreword

I honestly feel like I'm starting too many projects, but you know what? I don't freaking care. 

Let me present to you a Minyoon AU which I still haven't completely figured out yet, featuring: murder, angst, yandere, stalkers, blood, evidence, DNA samples, mops, buckets and the National Forensic Service.

This one's going to be full of dirt, grit and rather disturbing intentions. 

I'll put up trigger warnings as we progress into this messy chaotic world I've set up, so heed them when I do. 

Disclaimer: This body of work will draw from a lot of my real life work experience in forensic sciences. I will put up small fact boxes in the author notes of each chapter to explain the terms and methods. 

I hope you enjoy this, given how difficult it was to plot. Please comment when you finish reading, I love all my silent readers but I also need motivation to write. 

Author's Thoughts
LuckyLikesLemons
New chapter. Feeling sick and tired, I've had a difficult and stressful time these few weeks. Comments are soul food. What do you think Yoon is studying? What role do you think Minho will play?
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PenguinLOvers772 #1
Chapter 2: Ahhh busy yoonnie. Always working hard /im touched/ hahhahaha anyway I can say the pace is set up pretty good. U make your readers very intrigued to know what's going to happen next. Im am intrigued as well >.<
Your grammar is on point (like always which is A+), the flow of the story is nice but if u want to make it more impactful but short, try to indulge more in the characters' perspective/thoughts like ok the table is full with books n stuff so tell us what do yoon think of it? Is studying hard? Is the schedule tiring him? What exactly he wants to do? What is his mother doing now? People will tend to write it long bcoz less effort to skim on words but since ur style is minimal words u have to find some space to make it more impactful :D
And try to put more commas n such, it gives more concrete details to the story.
Ok that's all i want to point out. Keep updating and goodluck with your study n work! ~ Take care of yourself too ^^
PenguinLOvers772 #2
Chapter 1: Nice intro :D
Sphinx_ #3
Chapter 2: I can picture his living conditions and the things aroind his kitchen very vividly which makes it all fun when reading. I'm excited what case this hyung is talking about! Will we get to meet Mino there? Hmm curious, curious! Thank you for writing. ♡
Sphinx_ #4
Chapter 1: Just like you said, the story really does set the stage very well. It's very well written in a way that I could really feel the suspense while Yoon walks his way home. I'm very excited to read the next chapter and I'll do so very soon. Amazing as always, Lucky. ^^
padfoot_lover #5
Chapter 2: Want moreeeee...
maaaine #6
Chapter 2: The way you write, even adding those little details, brings me joy! It's like I wash there with Yoon at home seeing how you describe it perfectly.

I think Yoon is studying to become a Forensic Pathologist/Medical Examiner. They'll suspect Mino at first but he's not the real criminal. I'm super excited where the story goes!
Siz123456 #7
Chapter 2: Yoon learning to become a profiler? He's an FBI student wannabe? Hhahahahahaha....or a private detective run by a formal police? Wkwkwkwkwkwk...
Did he not earn enough in his job? Is he in poor condition?
Who will feed him properly...poor Yoonie...

Love the details you put about his living situations. This could easily becomes full novel, the plot kind of strong enough and it kinda gonna a whole long story with mysteries in it. ^^
Sinner_w #8
Chapter 2: This chapter was so good. Well written and easy to imagine it. Can't wait for mino's entrance. Thanks for the update❤
Hixone01 #9
Chapter 2: I love your writing, they are neat and details. Thank you for keep writing even when you are in hard times. Ms Writer FIGHTING..!! XOXO
SayYoonie #10
Chapter 2: For the life of me I am unable to upvote but letting you know your stories are really well written & wonderful to read. Keep doing you. And take all the time you need. ?
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