Morning Routine

Man or a Monster
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Morning Routine

 

Seungyoon awoke five minutes before his alarm did the honour, shivering and shaking in the cold.

 

The radiators in his room didn't work very well, but the bed here was more comfortable than the lumpy couch in the living room.

 

The house that he lived in was largely empty and run down, but it was warm (sometimes) and quiet and most importantly, provided a roof over his head. It belonged to his aunt and uncle, but they had moved to Seoul a few years ago, eager for a promotion and a change in pace. They had let him stay there instead, provided he would take care of electricity and gas bills and do the occasional repair.

 

He could have easily stayed with his mother in their tiny flat above the shop, but the commute was long and tiring and quite honestly, Seungyoon was sick of the noise and the cramped space.

 

His alarm triggered as he stumbled out of bed, a disembodied voice that echoed around the hollow walls - 'Wake up. 5:15 am. Wake up. 5:15 am. Wake up.' He sighed as he switched it off and made his way towards the bathroom at the end of the corridor.

 

He thought about all the assignments he had yet to complete while brushing his teeth, then remembered the report he had started yesterday at the lab. He had meant to finish it last night but he had been too tired and exhausted to do anything besides change his clothes and sleep.

 

Damn. He had to hand it in today, which meant he had to complete it now before heading to university for early morning classes.

 

Seungyoon finished washing up and changed into a fresh set of clothes, a pair of jeans with faded dye stains that he had worked hard to remove with bleach and an oversized linen shirt that managed to obscure his somewhat thin and lanky frame and the fact that he was losing weight.

 

The kitchen was a small area with linoleum tiles, a granite countertop and built in cupboards, decorated in a simple theme of black and white. The fridge was filled with a meagre range of fruit and vegetables, boxes of his mother's kimchi and cartons of milk that he used to make homemade yoghurt. The side shelf were stocked with various antibiotics and culture ingredients that he needed to make substrates, as well as several chemicals that required to be kept in cold storage.

 

In the corner was an industrial sink with a deep basin and draining board that he used to clean and prepare samples. His light micro

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LuckyLikesLemons
New chapter. Feeling sick and tired, I've had a difficult and stressful time these few weeks. Comments are soul food. What do you think Yoon is studying? What role do you think Minho will play?

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PenguinLOvers772
#1
Chapter 2: Ahhh busy yoonnie. Always working hard /im touched/ hahhahaha anyway I can say the pace is set up pretty good. U make your readers very intrigued to know what's going to happen next. Im am intrigued as well >.<
Your grammar is on point (like always which is A+), the flow of the story is nice but if u want to make it more impactful but short, try to indulge more in the characters' perspective/thoughts like ok the table is full with books n stuff so tell us what do yoon think of it? Is studying hard? Is the schedule tiring him? What exactly he wants to do? What is his mother doing now? People will tend to write it long bcoz less effort to skim on words but since ur style is minimal words u have to find some space to make it more impactful :D
And try to put more commas n such, it gives more concrete details to the story.
Ok that's all i want to point out. Keep updating and goodluck with your study n work! ~ Take care of yourself too ^^
PenguinLOvers772
#2
Chapter 1: Nice intro :D
Sphinx_
#3
Chapter 2: I can picture his living conditions and the things aroind his kitchen very vividly which makes it all fun when reading. I'm excited what case this hyung is talking about! Will we get to meet Mino there? Hmm curious, curious! Thank you for writing. ♡
Sphinx_
#4
Chapter 1: Just like you said, the story really does set the stage very well. It's very well written in a way that I could really feel the suspense while Yoon walks his way home. I'm very excited to read the next chapter and I'll do so very soon. Amazing as always, Lucky. ^^
padfoot_lover
#5
Chapter 2: Want moreeeee...
maaaine
#6
Chapter 2: The way you write, even adding those little details, brings me joy! It's like I wash there with Yoon at home seeing how you describe it perfectly.

I think Yoon is studying to become a Forensic Pathologist/Medical Examiner. They'll suspect Mino at first but he's not the real criminal. I'm super excited where the story goes!
Siz123456 #7
Chapter 2: Yoon learning to become a profiler? He's an FBI student wannabe? Hhahahahahaha....or a private detective run by a formal police? Wkwkwkwkwkwk...
Did he not earn enough in his job? Is he in poor condition?
Who will feed him properly...poor Yoonie...

Love the details you put about his living situations. This could easily becomes full novel, the plot kind of strong enough and it kinda gonna a whole long story with mysteries in it. ^^
Sinner_w #8
Chapter 2: This chapter was so good. Well written and easy to imagine it. Can't wait for mino's entrance. Thanks for the update❤
Hixone01 #9
Chapter 2: I love your writing, they are neat and details. Thank you for keep writing even when you are in hard times. Ms Writer FIGHTING..!! XOXO
SayYoonie #10
Chapter 2: For the life of me I am unable to upvote but letting you know your stories are really well written & wonderful to read. Keep doing you. And take all the time you need. ?