Are you afraid of the dark?

Man or a Monster
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α Are You Afraid of the Dark?

The wind whistled through the trees, creaking through dying branches and rustling through the dry leaves littering the rugged tar beneath his boots. 

Telephone poles loomed ominously in the dark as the lone streetlamp lighting the road guttered and finally blew out, plunging the street into darkness.

Seungyoon stopped for a minute before forging on, shivering a little in the cold. He was wrapped securely in a windcheater and a thick woolen scarf, but the chill seeped into his skin as sure as poison.

He walked faster, head bowed against the wind. The howling was worse now, a fine sleet starting to drizzle. He cursed under his breath, balling his fists deeper into his pockets. The last thing he wanted was to get drenched and catch a cold.

The moon was dull and waning, partially obscured by scurrying clouds. The weak light illuminated very little as he turned left into a weed choked alley, soles crunching over broken glass.

Not too far now.

The sleet began to fall in earnest, pellets of hail skimming over his exposed face. Treading carefully over patches of fast forming ice, he climbed over the chained gate onto the main road, heaving a sigh of relief as he spotted the familiar rows of houses on each side.

He had only walked a few steps when he stopped abruptly.

What was that?

He whirled around, trying to find the source of the noise. He was sure that he had heard right – a

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LuckyLikesLemons
New chapter. Feeling sick and tired, I've had a difficult and stressful time these few weeks. Comments are soul food. What do you think Yoon is studying? What role do you think Minho will play?

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PenguinLOvers772
#1
Chapter 2: Ahhh busy yoonnie. Always working hard /im touched/ hahhahaha anyway I can say the pace is set up pretty good. U make your readers very intrigued to know what's going to happen next. Im am intrigued as well >.<
Your grammar is on point (like always which is A+), the flow of the story is nice but if u want to make it more impactful but short, try to indulge more in the characters' perspective/thoughts like ok the table is full with books n stuff so tell us what do yoon think of it? Is studying hard? Is the schedule tiring him? What exactly he wants to do? What is his mother doing now? People will tend to write it long bcoz less effort to skim on words but since ur style is minimal words u have to find some space to make it more impactful :D
And try to put more commas n such, it gives more concrete details to the story.
Ok that's all i want to point out. Keep updating and goodluck with your study n work! ~ Take care of yourself too ^^
PenguinLOvers772
#2
Chapter 1: Nice intro :D
Sphinx_
#3
Chapter 2: I can picture his living conditions and the things aroind his kitchen very vividly which makes it all fun when reading. I'm excited what case this hyung is talking about! Will we get to meet Mino there? Hmm curious, curious! Thank you for writing. ♡
Sphinx_
#4
Chapter 1: Just like you said, the story really does set the stage very well. It's very well written in a way that I could really feel the suspense while Yoon walks his way home. I'm very excited to read the next chapter and I'll do so very soon. Amazing as always, Lucky. ^^
padfoot_lover
#5
Chapter 2: Want moreeeee...
maaaine
#6
Chapter 2: The way you write, even adding those little details, brings me joy! It's like I wash there with Yoon at home seeing how you describe it perfectly.

I think Yoon is studying to become a Forensic Pathologist/Medical Examiner. They'll suspect Mino at first but he's not the real criminal. I'm super excited where the story goes!
Siz123456 #7
Chapter 2: Yoon learning to become a profiler? He's an FBI student wannabe? Hhahahahahaha....or a private detective run by a formal police? Wkwkwkwkwkwk...
Did he not earn enough in his job? Is he in poor condition?
Who will feed him properly...poor Yoonie...

Love the details you put about his living situations. This could easily becomes full novel, the plot kind of strong enough and it kinda gonna a whole long story with mysteries in it. ^^
Sinner_w #8
Chapter 2: This chapter was so good. Well written and easy to imagine it. Can't wait for mino's entrance. Thanks for the update❤
Hixone01 #9
Chapter 2: I love your writing, they are neat and details. Thank you for keep writing even when you are in hard times. Ms Writer FIGHTING..!! XOXO
SayYoonie #10
Chapter 2: For the life of me I am unable to upvote but letting you know your stories are really well written & wonderful to read. Keep doing you. And take all the time you need. ?