Rivals

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Will you let your rival win?

Foreword

Being the top rivals in school in terms on academics, Chorong and Bomi keep on fighting and bickering over small things. They hate each other that much that it's ruining their day to see each other. Or maybe that is just for Chorong only.

As sport's day being held in school, she finds herself participating. And they are into each other again, at first as rivals again but the second time as a team. How will a game can change their hatred towards each other into an unexpected friendship or maybe something more than just that?

 

A/N 2 parts shot. :)

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pandaxonce 1241 streak #1
Chapter 2: I love this so much!
Panda0619 #2
Chapter 2: Awww sweet! I like how you extracted kindness thru shared in recent times to help us imagine the scenes..

Thanks!
pandanonymous #3
Chapter 2: Ahh! this story.. I honestly thought at first that Bomi aimed for that 1st place for Chorong to notice her :o but it turns out to be something deeper. The competitiveness in Chorong is such mood, LOL we all know her gaze can seriously kill when she's serious and mad. A soft Bomi = soft me T.T when she opened up to Chorong istg my heart hurts af. Damn the fluff in this whole sports event! Oh god. The change is Chorong is such a good touch! Like how she never break the rules but did, and most importantly how she actually enjoyed the game instead of feeling competitive. (cupid Hajoo is cute too!) I have so many things to say but I lost it when Chorong confessed. Heol. PS! I love how you added photos to it. Visual level 999! <3
AegyoPRASH #4
Chapter 2: That was so cute, I really enjoyed it!
ckaz99 #5
Chapter 2: I enjoyed this so much \(＾ｖ＾)/
There's all this tension and everyone's lowkey teasing them about it cos they all feel it hehe. The pictures added to the story amazingly.. I love that Chorong is so focused on being mad and keeping her spot safe that she's not realising the ridiculousness of her feelings and what draws her so much to Bomi. That jealousy when Bomi got picked by Nana AHH there's so many moments that made me grin~ but I especially loved how Bomi knew that Chorong never took her eyes off her, and when Bomi thought Chorong is definitely her type but probably impossible.

"If the price is me, will you work hard to win?" Hot damn, that was such a line! That was really cool, Chorong, omooo. The confession was so cute and funny, I was blushing for Chorong too after Bomi's words uwu~ Thank you for writing this gift! I've enjoyed it well :)
Ma_rie21 #6
?WOW ?another amazing story that I will probs read over, over, over and over again. Going to keep supporting you through your writing. Loving all your stories so far. Keep up the good work. Fighting...... ??❤
Loverong #7
Chapter 1: I hope you can update soon authornim!
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