ONE FINE DAY (OUR STORY)

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"They look like the stars, I wish they would never fade"

 

"I want you to be in my life..."

 

Everything was normal that day, before it got ruinned by what people said about them.

 

Everything was supposed to be okay.

 

Would it be??

Foreword

I got inspired by a short korean movie that I found randomly on Youtube, I'm not sure about the tittle, but one person said the title it's Pluto, I"m really not sure about it. I found the story is good then I really have a willing to put it into a Chobom story, so I'm giving myself a try. It's gonna be my first time to write such a long one shot story.

 

The story 80% is inspired by the movie.

 

I hope you guys enjoy it and giving this story a chance to be read.

 

Thank you

Xo

 

Pabbochomi

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ckaz99 #1
Chapter 1: Omooo I felt so many things through this omagaad *clutches hand on heart dramatically* ooow this is written very well, especially knowing it's inspired from a movie. You were able to translate what you watched into something that can be read. This is beautiful. The dread and sadness of the past as well as the present is laced throughout it. It's very discomforting and my stomach was clenched while reading. Oh the angst!

But that end part shows hope and promise. We all knew what Bomi was really getting at when she explained why she was there and I think that made me die inside. Bomi’s like.. my mom loves him and everyone loves him, but Bomi you.. what about you? The denial and sadness of this, pretending she’s fine.. /crying/

And also the kiss asdfafdsfsaf. I'm really happy about that, I was hoping for one! The pain of it all was making it seem hopeless and strictly friendship when it still seemed like there was something more. Ohh yes I'm relishing in that moment and how natural it is.. I love it when no words need to be exchanged.. The ending is poetic, and that can make it frustrating since it's open-ended, ow my heart. But.. Bomi said she'll come back, and that makes me sure she has a plan to do what she really wants, to be who she really is. To be free :)
ChobomPanda #2
Chapter 1: Great one shot!! I thought this one would end up so angsty and I will need some heal. But the last paragraph is already the heal for my poor heart hahaha. Thank you for the story :)
shakess #3
Chapter 1: I remember watching this short story too! Another good story featuring Chobom, hopefully they did end up together in the end. :)
KwonJoYeon #4
Chapter 1: I think, I watched the movie too.. I also forgot the title.. the girl there is making pots.. am i right?
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