Haunting of a Mistake (Oneshot)

Description

Kim Jaejoong: a taekwondo blackbelt and currently studying in college with his brother Changmin. they, along with their sick father, were left by their mother for another man and from that tim on Jaejoong was the sole breadwinner of the family until Changmin was old enough to help him strive for their family.

Jung SaeYoung: Yunho's younger sister and musical prodigy. she resents all things illegal as their parents died trying to deal with drugs. she and her brother worked their way through life and for their education. it was during middle school that she and her brother met Jaejoong and during highschool they fell in love and got together.

 

but Kim Jaejoong broke a promise to the one he loved the most, Jung SaeYoung, his bestfriend Yunho's sister. he regretted the mistake but he was left with no other choice.

she left him not knowing why he had to do it. will she ever find out?

will Jae ever get the woman he loves back? or will he end up regretting his choice forever?

Foreword

this is my very first time writing a oneshot and in a third person's pov..it may not be good so please be nice..hihihi i wasnt supposed to write this but it's really been bugging me for a few days now that i just had to get this plotline out of my head..

for the record Yunho is my bias in DBSK but i think Jae fits the role more..hihihi some scenes also did not turn out the way i hoped but you be the judge..thanks! hope you all like it..

ps. sorry if there's no picture, if im any good at photoshop i wouldve posted something..and i have nothing against Yoochun..hihi

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mychokyumintchip #1
It took me awhile to get back to this. xD haha Glad to know it had a happy ending. They all had sad stories in the beginning at least this one balanced it out. Hihi. And lol at the last part. Yunho just had to ruin the moment of the two. :))