Asphyxiated

Twenty-Six Reasons Why... I Love You

Title: Asphyxiated
Type: Drabble
Word Count: 302
From: ABC Challenge (SooSeop)
Part: 1/26
Pairing: SooSeop [Soohyun/Kiseop]
Genre: Romance, Light Drama, Very light Angst?
Rating: G
Warnings: light boyxboy, if you consider this that
Disclaimer: I own nothing, but if I did, I would make Soohyun mine!! And make him live in my large closet with Eunhyuk and Minho. :D



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Asphyxiated
(v.) [past tense] to suffocate; to be smothered

 

As his gaze traveled upwards, he swore that time had come to a halt. His heart pounded mercilessly against his ribcage as his breathing became labored. He tried to regulate his breathing, but it only worsened. Then, to his dismay, warm, dark hazel eyes bore into his own, and pearly white teeth were exposed in a bright smile; his smile was suffocating.

 

His palms began to perspire when the boy drew closer to him, his smile broadening.

 

“Kiseop-ah,” he greeted, his voice as smooth as velvet. (1) Kiseop swallowed harshly, his frantic eyes refusing to leave the boy standing in front of him.

 

“Soohyun-ssi,” he replied hesitantly, his voice weak from the lack of oxygen. (2)

 

“Why so formal, Kiseoppie~?” Soohyun asked as he slung his arm over Kiseop's shoulders, who immediately tensed at the contact. Kiseop then realized that he had stopped breathing altogether, which concerned the older boy.

 

“Kiseop-ah, are you okay? Kiseop?” he inquired, his voice filled with worry.

 

“Fine,” Kiseop choked out before he squirmed away from Soohyun. Kiseop refused to meet Soohyun's gaze, and the older boy frowned.

 

“Kiseop?” he called again..

 

“I need to go.” Before he turned around, Kiseop glanced at Soohyun, and he immediately wished that he hadn't. Despair and hurt were etched into Soohyun's face, and the scene caused Kiseop's heart to thud; however, Kiseop could only walk away.

 

Soohyun was breathtaking, that was for sure, but it was too much for Kiseop. Even just the sound of the older boy's name was enough to make breathing difficult for Kiseop. Soohyun had never done him any wrong, he had always been the perfect person to Kiseop, but Kiseop found it physically tolling to be around him. Soohyun was suffocating him, and Kiseop hated him for that.

 

 

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(1) formal Korean greeting for close friends
(2) formal Korean greeting for people that are not close; acquaintances

 

A/N: Geez, finally finished. And yet, I feel like something's missing... I'll come back to it later. XD I need to get working on the other ones. I hope you enjoyed this small blurb. It's not my best work, but it's decent. I hope you all stick around to read the rest. :D

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PontatoFanta
Letter G is done!!! Now onto 'Heaven.' ._.

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superkissshine #1
Chapter 7: And please make the squel
superkissshine #2
Chapter 7: In the sqeul you should have soohyun pov after
he kils kiseop and you should have kiseop pov in
Heaven with hoon and mayble have soohyun kill
himself becasue he miss and love kiseop so much
and have a love battle between soohyun and hoon
In heaven for kiseop heart and trust
TaikoLuver #3
Chapter 7: Oh.My.ALDFJALDKFJKDFLD!!!!!!!!!! That last story was soooo amazing!!!!!! As to a sequel, I cannot tell you how much I would love one, but I honestly don't know where you could go. I mean the ending was soooooooo sad, and yet sooooo good!!! Looking forward to your next update!!! ^^
P.S. I now know what the X means on the map...T.T
kiseopping
#4
Chapter 7: Oh my. that last story was mind blowing. Gravitation, it had my full attention the whole time. I could not look away. I feel kind of proud of myself for figuring out everything without the explanation - but I don't think it was that hard. Anyway... wow just wow. I really loved Gravitation.
Not only that, but the other stories, I really enjoyed them. I won't lie though, Gravitation was my favorite of the bunch and personally I don't think you should make a sequel... the ending if perfect just like that.
Wow, just like wow. I can't even get over how amazing that story was. Haha, wow.
shattered_moonbeam
#5
I was procrastinating doing homework (ha, no surprise there) when I came across this lovely set of stories... *_______*
Just throwing a few things out there:
-I love your writing style. It has details, but still flows. It's sooo easy to picture everything that's going on.
-The story line for "Gravitation" could be modified slightly and made into a short novel. I'M NOT KIDDING. (When you take the size of each page on the computer and think about it...there'd be way more pages in a paperback size.) I don't think it needs tons and tons of modifications, even. LIKE, I'D TOTALLY BUY IT IF YOU DID THAT!! <3333333
Fighting!!
VentusWindrunner #6
I have no words for all the sad feels I feel rn. ;-; I'm being laughed at by my room mate and best friend for bawling my eyes out to Gravitation. but it's so well written ;A; I give you props my friend.
sseonflower #7
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Ohmygod. This was. I can't even describe. I was on a roller coaster of emotions while reading this whole thing. Ngl, the part where Kiseop found Hoon got a few tears out of me >__> but I had a feeling something was going to happen to him eventually. I also had a feeling Soohyun had something to do with the deaths but no idea what. Ugh this was all kinds of fantastic.
I wouldn't mind if you made a sequel but I think this great all on it's own honestly. Maybe you could write something from Soohyun's perspective of the story? Idk it all depends on how you feel~ but I can't wait for the next letter!