Chapter 1: beautiful. i like it..no love it..and the great thing, you remember every moment at JJ's pov..and make it in really good story in changmin's pov *thumbsup* btw, if it happen in reality, in will be in world war phase between family. and ofc divorce almost always in the result.
but thanks for this beautiful story XD
Chapter 1: Beautiful, but can't help (because I'm a woman) to feel really really sorry for Changmin's wife. That woman didn't deseve to be treated like that. I wish Jaejoong left Changmin and move on with a better person (an unmarried one).
Chapter 1: hello frienship. am back.. hihi..
anyway am really starting to be a fan of your fics with a bit of angst in it.. coz am really anticipating reading the "end" where i know that there will be a HEA or HFN at the end.
to start with.. cheating/infidelity/adultery is never my thing when it comes to reading fics but.. when it seems that it involves minjae, i really dunno why but its really easy for me to accept that Changmin is cheating on his wife just so he could be with Jaejoong.
and when i thought that changmin is about to choose his wife over jaejoong.. am about to throw a fit like how could he have done it to jaejoong.. treating him like a common by paying him with his services.. and then when he's starting to get worried that his wife might find out.. he's just gonna end it with him.
but am glad to know that it was not easy for him when it comes to deciding who to choose. after all he really do/did love his wife and regarding jaejoong.. it was obvious that he really is starting to grown some serious feelings toward jaejoong. but in the end am very happy that he chooses jaejoong at the end. hope it will be a HEA for them. ;)
i love ur dialogues!!e.g:to tell him....
to tell him....
to tell him....
He's empty.....
He's drowning...
He's trapped....
I love how u used these typse of dialogues throughout the story.
Till now i liked ur story the best because of ur writing.
u r a great writer.u r talented.keep it up!!
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