A Deal With Love

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A/N: This is actually supposed to be a oneshot, but depending on how it goes, it just might turn into a fic!! hehe ^^
Have fun reading~

Choi Minho, the perfect guy.
Oh Hae Min, the almost average girl. 
So exactly what do they have to do with each other?
Well, read on and find out ;)

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Foreword

Choi Minho. The name that was plastered all over my books and wall. The voice that could  make me lose my sense of direction. The face that could make any girl swoon. The body that tinted cheeks red. The guy I liked for 4 years straight.
That Choi Minho.

Where did I meet him? It was the biggest game of the year. Before I knew it, I was huddled in warm coats and blankets, shivering from the chilly air that wandered past. I looked intently through the binoculars aiming here and there finding something- 
Bingo. Choi Minho, stretching ever so gracefully on the field with his mates. Obviously that tank guy with a mega 6-pack is on the school soccer team; the soccer team that doesn't accept loss.

What do I like about him? Absolutely everything. There's not a flaw in him that makes him any less perfect than an angel. His eyes, his smile, his face, his charm. Flaming Charisma, people call him, and it fits him. There's nothing he can do that could make him even better except...maybe finally notice me? 

And now he was graduating.
In a week, to be exact.
That is when my life will end if I don't do something about it.
Something big.

Or maybe I just need a little push along the way...

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littlepenguins
#1
Love the story! <3 ^_^
thelittlethings
#2
@lia_ana: ahaha yes, maybe minho really does like her ;)<br />
keke ok! we shall update soon :D<br />
YIXING_lia_MINHO #3
yay!! update... hehhe<br />
MINHO like her i guess!! LOL~<br />
n she stutters~~~<br />
LOL update soon ne~~ :D
thelittlethings
#4
@lia_ana: LOL yupp, everyone's making deals ;)
YIXING_lia_MINHO #5
hahaha~~ onew make a deal...<br />
LOL...<br />
update ne~~
thelittlethings
#6
@marshielisa12: YAY YES, SHARE THE LOVE OF ONEW YEAAH? ;)<br />
HAHA.<br />
WE LOVE YOU TOO FOR SUBBING AND COMMENTING <3
thelittlethings
#7
@cherrytootsiepop HAHA YOU WRITE SUCH LONG COMMENTS. WE LOVE LONG COMMENTS!! <3<br />
Sung Mi is pretty desperate to help LOL. i'm glad our portrayal of her came out ok.<br />
i don't know about Hae Min LOL, i don't think our description came out right. i guess we'll try to change that a bit next chapter. :P<br />
<br />
HEHE THANK YOU FOR READING OUR FIC<br />
WE LOVE YOU <3
marshielisa12 #8
HAAH ONEW IS SO CUTE!!
rockabyebaby #9
hahaha.. i thought chapter 2 was funny.. i was laughing..<br />
so sung mi is a lil trickster, and her rambling around onew was really cute...<br />
she seems so outgoing and confident but around a hot guy and ur crush even the most confident girl can turn to mush.. lol<br />
idk if i like hae min much.. she seems kinda dumb... i mean sung mi was wrapped in onews arms and she still thinks she needs onew's number??<br />
but i did laugh at the end where hae min kept saying things getting minho all confused and onew.. that was cute..<br />
will be waiting for the next chapter XD<br />
hwaiting!
rockabyebaby #10
ooooh just read chapter 1... this is nice i like it...<br />
i decided i really like sung mi.. at first i thought she was kind of annoying, but i like her a lot. hahaha<br />
she's the totally cool and outgoing best friend that will do anything, i like that. hehe<br />
hae min im not sure about her yet, we'll see how this all plays down^^<br />
but i totally agree w/ hae min staring at him, and daydreaming i do that too~ lol i'm too in love w/ minho^^ hehe<br />
*off to read next chappie* will comment again XD