Sunrise

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A drabble that was self prompted from an image

Foreword

Owlish eyes now gaze into a burning sky, red sky in the morning – a shepherd’s warning. Ironic really, considering the day that lies ahead of him.

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Rb2012 #1
Chapter 1: Though short but very sad
Change17 #2
Chapter 1: Okay... Maybe nini is dead? And So I will be too soon.? (Or the tried to get over it after the funeral) or he wants to change his life after the one day. Idk but it feels really sad but also kinda hopeful? I like it ♡
siemprekaisoo #3
Chapter 1: I'm probably wrong but the melancholy of this story makes me think it's Jongin's funeral day. The line, "I'll be home soon" makes me think it's Jongin's last words to Soo. I love how the beauty of the setting comes out in your writing.
Nicole121314 #4
Chapter 1: The story might not imply more about KaiSoo (i mean the presence itself) - but the way you write is good and.i like it.
ShippinEmAll #5
Chapter 1: I mean it seems like it ended on a really dark note...so I'm a little worried and hope you are doing well. And if I'm completely off-base, which I hope I am then...idk

It was a pleasant read till before the ending when I started to get a bad feeling about where it was going.
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