The Window to the Heart

Description

Jongin's new bodyguard is a pain in his side, that is until they both begin to bring out the best in each other.

Foreword

No words are spoken but the firm look on the man’s face and his generally formal attire leaves the man at the bar looking sheepish and nodding. Shined black shoes approach the round table and he stands in the centre of the seats, a narrowed gaze is set on one lone figure in the corner.

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eclipseborn1 #1
Chapter 1: This was such a beautiful story! But more than plot, it's the way you write that I really enjoy. It's so easy going and light yet you're great at bringing emotions to life with your words
Rb2012 #2
Chapter 1: Cute story
SoSquishy #3
Chapter 1: I love how slow, cute and sweet their relationshil became! It's so refreshing ????
nounoukaisoo #4
Chapter 1: That was soooooooo beautiful and sweet❤❤❤ i really enjoyed reading, ksoo being mysterious and cold while working and then showing his sweet and soft sides to ji i love it dgddcghh? thank you for sharing, it was really cute
siemprekaisoo #5
Chapter 1: I really enjoyed reading this and I'm so glad it ended up being longer! I also like that you included Soo's perspective. I hope that you think about writing a sequel... I'd love to see what happens to them!
BehnazYB #6
Sooooo beautiful and sweet *_* I'm not much in to long comments but I have to say that this story is amazing, even though it was short (for me atleast XD) but it gives enough details and character development was good too d(^_^)b thanks for sharing this amazing story with us. It would be nice if you could write a sequel to it
InariChi #7
There are so many things I can say about this but I guess I should start by saying that I absolutely loved it. I admire your writing so much, it's so clear, detailed, and easy to understand but has a charm to it that never fails to make me smile and laugh. The characters feel real with their mannerisms, motives and interactions that it's easy to find myself engrossed and engaged in the story and its plot. Both characters grew over such a short fic but nothing seemed rushed or out of place. Nothing was wasted or simply there to pad the word count. Everything flowed well and nicely, I love your writing like always, and even after taking a break the magic you have still shines bright. Ahh I've missed this so much!
I really enjoyed how their relationship started and how it became something more. How Jongin grew up to be more mature and understanding and Kyungsoo grew to be more open and expressive. They both grew marvelously and helped each other realize what the other was lacking. It's such a wonderful read, Lulu. Thank you for sharing it ^^
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