Chapter 1: It's sweet and sad, i actually don't know what to feel but its beautifully written authornim.

Chapter 1: I love this. It makes me sad as much as it makes me happy. Having to lose someone through memory loss must be so painful. This story kind of reminds me of The Vow, but in a more soft, romantic sort of way. I love that this is a one shot, but I'd love to see it in a full-fledged story. Your little details, like how she looks coming in from the rain, make works like this so much more enjoyable. I hope to read more of your works in the future!