Chapter 1: well written! ❤️

Chapter 1: Wow!
I really like it!!! Minseok and Heejin are special couple to me.
Minseok could lie to Heejin and the others, but he saved them in the end.
He left so much clues.
Thanks Mel!
Have a great day!
Happy New Year!!!
Hugs ^^,

Chapter 1: Oh my god! You nailed it again. I love every single thing in this story. You are so brilliant!

Chapter 1: Woah. This is so cool! Minseok, I know you're up to something & I kinda hated you for a moment there but you are so genius! Gladly, Heejin paid attention to your words before. Heejin & Minseok ❤❤❤

Chapter 1: MINSEOK MY BOYY kinda in tears rn because of this man child but wow for a one shot it has so much of a story and romance and the mystery. It's like a chaptered story with all the detail but it didn't require a year for all the updates. I'm shooook

OMG SEEMS SO COOL READING NOW XD

Chapter 1: SH84ISTPGXOGXGOXPGCPHV
OHMYGOSH THIS WAS SO GOOODDDDDDDD
i love,reading futuristic and crime and thriller things and seeing that it was,xiuhee on top of all that made me wanna read it even more.
Xiuhee was so cuteeeeeee
I love,how,minseok was giving heejin hints the whole,entire time
Ohmygosh i almost cried,in that scene,with jongdae
Thats terrifying
Overall i really enjoyed,all the action that happened,in the story and even tho it was only a,oneshot it felt like i read a whole,series ahahaha
Im so glad,minseok and,heejin ended,up together,in the enddddd
My hearteuuuuu
So sad that woohalbae was killed,off by the government, causing hyunmi to lose,compassion and all sorts of feelings
Man, the government is cruel
They dont deserve to have a christmas holiday with loving families
Im glad that the anecdote,was found and the Recusants were able to survive the explosion and kill off the virus amd evil military government peoples.
SO GOOD MY HEARTEU
AGH
<33333

Chapter 1: oooooh this is spooky HOHOHOHOHOHO I LIKE IT!!! Dystopian AU <3333

oh my that r-66 thing is creepy gahhhhhh I don't like the sound of that ;-;
OH HAI STRANGER :D i mean, hi harmless
LOL he can't even gulp poor child... :') when gulping leads to death, what a life

"hiding between the marts" that's something i want to try doing. except not in this setting... i just want to feast on whatever I wish to by hiding in grocery stores...like in modern day..ok sorry i can dream

mhmmmm handcuff him ;) oh? heejin wants to handcuff him? how mmmmmmmmm ;)
hohohoho she got the keys too~
I love this recusants concept, not being injected and all

OOH YES FIGHT FIGHT FIGT FIGHT
YAY MINSEOK FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT HAMMER SLAM SWOOOSHH
oh jk bye jongdae i hope you have a good life
oh poor woohyun that for you
ah don't you just love exploding into bits of meaty goodness.

hey no don't kill minseok wtf kyungsoo this is why no one wants to see your egg shaped headass (i shouldn't be talking like this about one of my favorite members but ya know, it's whatever)
mhm handcuff him real good
nope jk that was not real good too loose you gotta be tighter
s o r r y

dang, late night convos :') how endearing
lol east coast why b r uh
ok thanks for that information now kiss her

oh there it is ;)
GODDMANIT AEMI WHY'D YOU HAVE TO INNNNNNNNN
oh whoop de dooooo time to risk lives once a gain

aha yes bomb the place leggo hyunmi
make em whistle like a missile bOMB bOMB

lol that random comment about squeaky floor?? XD
oh boy an injection with the formula that produces Carbon Dioxide and Water iM sO ScArEd
ffff IM BEING SO WEIRD TODAY I SOUND SO SARCASTIC BHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ^^

ok minseok thanks
ahA HE IS GOOD !! but whyyy is he helping i must know... THIS SHOULD BE A TWO SHOT HAHAHAHAHAHA jkjkjk is he secretly against the government? good boi

which way is east tho i'd need to pull up a compass real quicc
oh jk it's labeled the east BAHAHAHAHAH WHOOPS i was about to do some mathematical thing to calculate the distance from the sun to the -- what am i blabbering now

HOOOO MINSEOK IS SO SMArt but HEEJIN YASS THANK GOODNESS SHE REALIZED IT'S HIS BDAY phewwww
bUT wHO dRoVe ThE cAr To ThAt EnTrAnCe is the real question at hand

NO NOT THE BOMB!!!! aww boo minseok already knew he was going to suffer the explosion... T___T poor child

ok kyungsoo no one asked for your help you insignificant
...
sorry for my excessive cursing mama <3 :D forgive me?

OOOH YAY AN ANTIDOTE FINALLY mah GIRL MINSEOK YAS gURLLL
guy.. not girl but i needed to get into the emotion I'm sorry

LOL HYUNMI SMILING YAYAYAYAYAYAY
hi minseok glad to see you
OK BUT DOES HE STILL WORK FOR THE GOVERNMENT do people think he's dead as well?? bOI

LOL MY COMMENTS ARE WILD IM SORRY THESE ARE SO DIFFERENT THAN THE COMMENTS I LEAVE ON SWEET ROMANCE FICS ABHAHAHAHAHAHAHA but this was rlly good i was on edge the whole time i really like the action esp i felt like I was in the setting while I was reading!!! :O I was sP00ked !!! ahhh mel you're good at these mysterious dark kind of prompts i love <333 the dystopian kind of theme rlly suits your style of writing tbh :O

Chapter 1: Ohmygosh the world is such a dark place T^T used to?!?! i wonder how many people there are now T^T
none in this city :( ohhhh ohmygosh if you don't die from the government you die from the pollution and sickness?!?! O__O
The government is so cruel!!!!!! aaaaahhhhh
the recusants sound so cool~!!!
KYUNGSOO~!!! :D i don't know if i should think he's cool or scary with the knives xD
oh cool~! a skyscraper~! no one would look in such a building with such a state right?!?! maybe it was a mouse or something???
no one alive... T^T i hope the other cities of the world aren't in such a condition T^T
ohmygoshhhh okay kyungsoo is super super cool!!! he built the weapons?! ohmygoshhh~! <3
kyaaaaaaa baekhyun is also super cool~ it reminds me of ephemeral crown <3 baek is super cool there too~
awww jongdae is so caring~
nuuuuuuuuuu everyone T^T the world is a scary place T^T
R-66... does it have a meaning hmmmm ohhh wowww that's like all the information anyone would need!!! the governemnt could steal so easily!! and hackers too probably T^T
ohmygoshhhh R-66 is even shadier?!?!?! omgg
eeeeeeeeeeeehhhh too much detail ew ew ew the car i hope he had his windows closed.... i hate tickets but maybe that is nicer than instant BOOM... i hope the other citizens were alright that were there :( it could've led to more incidents :( what are you doing government?!?! T^T
it's always greed for power T^T don't listen to those people people~ T^T
ohmygosh baek is so cool!!
ohmygosh heejin is so lucky she is not alone or she would die from clumsiness xD
HAHAHHAHAH XD so lame xD i love it hahahah xD ohmygoshhh heejin shouldn't laugh XD such a serious moment!! xD
awwww she's not focusing on his name~ just his voice~ he is that charming <3
that's too fast to trust him! XD
ohmygosh living in such a controlled city sounds horrible T^T
ohhhh he heard them approaching? ohmygosh he must be super skilled as they didn't find anyone in the city <3
kyaaaaaa ohmygosh i love his smile~~ aaaahhhhhh
hahahah xD ohmygosh baek and xiumin are such a funny combo~ i love it~
oh! if he wanted he could've escaped now but he didn't so he must be good right?!? or he is trying to gain their trust and backfire it?!!? O__O
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH HIS GRIN!!!! ohmy heart T^T asdfsadfuiwejf
he's calling himself suspicious~ xd
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how can he be so cute and humorous when he's locked up? awwwwwwwww
wiggling his arms~! xD somehow i get the image of a chicken... i'm sorry xiumin!!! xD
ohhh they're the recusants so cool!!! :D it is a hard task to escape the government so it makes sense there weren't a lot of them??
ohhhh what experiment :o ohhhh hyunmi yelled!!
OHMYGOSHHHHH the curee!!!!
ohmygsohhhh they are all super cool!! aemi could hack and find a blueprint of a building and minseok could make an escape plan and they would work so well together~ awww i get jealous because of my own imagination xD hahahahahha xD ^^'
ohhh it's nice that kyungsoo keeps her on rational earth when asking if he's safe xD i think she would blindly believe minseok then just like the people who follow the government T^T good good friends~ although i'm not sure if they're friends since we don't know about their past hmmmmm
ahhhh his smile T^T it shakes my heart every time~ <3
of course you won't get a proper answer! prove yourself~! (althoough i trust you T^T )
ohmygosh this town is deserted too?! T^T i hope there still are a lot of survivors :(
ohhh they all sleep together, no one on watch?
yeahhhh i wouldn't risk it too xd
ahhhh fairytale reference <3 awwwwwwww
ohmygosh hyunmi is so cool~!!!!!!! kyaaaaaaa
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT WOOHYUN T^T OHMYGOSHHHHH when i didn't see him i thought he was maybe in the governemnt city but at least alive ohmygosh this is even more and more cruel how can they?!?!??! T^T nuuuuuuuuuuu hurry baek T^T
ahhhh hyunmi is so cool i can't~
awwwwwwwwwwwww awwwww he's holding her fingers T^T that simple smal touch <3 awwwwww
aaaaahhhh heejin should learn how to fight T^T ohmygosh the feeling of being powerless is so frustrating T^T what if they die because she can't help T^T nuuuuuuuuuuuu my friends T^T my comrades T^T
you mean you can fight T^T
awwwwwwwwwwwwww he grinned again <3
ah ahhhhh minseok is so cool T^T oh my heart what are you doing to me?!?!? this is deadly to read for me xD
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aemi is so cool too!~ <3
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOOOO JONGDAE T^T NOOOOOOOOOOOO T^T how could they?!??! T^T why does he always get blown?!?!?!? T^T nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
ohhh kyungsoo is so smart~! ohmygosh the virus is really dangerous T^T a bomb, a gps, access to almost everything T^T
ohmygosh kyungsoo xD i shouldn't laugh but his bluntness xD
ahhhh but so interesting!! i wonder what is causing the malfunction within him :D i hope heejin finds it in his blood!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how he called her a sneaky fox is so cuteeee :D gosh i can't stop grinning my face hurts xD the muscles!
i think one of the others would notice she didn't lock it thoughx D
she's the only one thanking him xD
owwwww has he been locked up as an experiment so long?! T^T poor minseok T^T to be with people... to feel alive again... that would mean heejin wouldn't be someone special right? he just likes company again? but it's alright T^T if he feels better T^T
it's so sad because she believes in second chances, heejin must have learned that from hyunmi T^T :(
wowwww she turned into a hulk X D i love it XD all the passion~
awwwwww that would so cuteee~!! but only visiting at their bdays, two times, is too short of a period T^T what about the other days~ >.<
OHMYGOSH HE SAID IT HE SAID MEET YOU OHMYGOSHHHH!!!!!!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww he kissed gently~ <3 oh my heart kyaaaaaaaaaaa why is he so sweet~ <3
ohmygosh xD awkward~~~~~~~ poor aemi xD ohmygosh she sees he doesn't have the handcuffs either!!! heejin must be in trouble... ohoh....
ohmygosh did he maybe regret it?! was it the spur of the moment?!?! T^T nuuuuuuu
wait they have one already?!?!?! bye bye heejins purpose of the team xD
without her!!!! awwwww xD
all for revenge~! ohoho~
ohmygosh is something wrong?!?! i hope it's nervousness yes >.<
oh noooo minseok seems suspicious, aemi is right. but i don't want to believe he's not good T^T but but the signs hmmmmmm
ohhh~!!! it reminds me of the lab in luchy one mv!
ohhh handy~~ so small and still with such great impact :D did she make them or did kyungsoo make them since he's a weapon specialist? or did they make it together with chemistry and weapon?? :o
why is his smile so deadly~ <3 ahhh my heart~
it sounds like minseok is delusional XD
hmmm four directions...
ohhh they key to the antidote!!! :D but the antidote isn't there then?
ohmygoshhh baek!!! nooooo why did you press the button!!!???
LURING YOU IN HERE/?!?!??! what is the meaning of this ohmygoshhhh!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HE LIEDDDDD THE ONE WHO MAKES HER HEART BEAT SO FAST LIEDDDD T^T NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
my heart T^T how could you T^T nuuuuuuuu
ohhhhhh "remember our talk"!!! :O everything was for an escape plan!! his specialty!!
ohhh hyunmi is so cool T^T i can't stop saying it ohmygoshhh <3
hahahah xD kyung flattening his eyes in this moment xD
ahhhhhhh hyunmi~!!!! it's amazing she keeps her cool in all this T^T
is he holding them off??!?!?! what if it's an act?!?! ahhhhh my trust has gone down the drain T^T i'm so sorry minseok T^T
awwwww even in this moment kyungsoo is such a gentleman~ <3
ohmygosh i hope they won't track the car trails T^T
was him being an experiment a lie only? he is infected by the r66 virus if he's from the government?? ohmygoshhh minseok T^T so many questions unanswered T^T
ohmygsohhhh the hug was only for the usb stick?!?! T^T
HE"S ALIVEEEEE THANK GOSH HES ALIVE MINSEOK T^T i wanna hug him and slap him and arrrrrrghhhh T^T
nuuuu all the talk they had was calculated all for this moment?? T^T but he couldn't know that baek would press the button so it was all precaution for this all??? did he pretend to remember the r-66 formula as a trick as well or did he genuinely remember just that time? XIUMIN WHY YOU PLAY WITH MY HEART T^T ohmygoshhh my head
i hope they find more companions later to go against the government and people who have the r-66 who are willing to be tested with the antidote! i think it's super cool how heejin seems so smart XD
it made sense!!! and it's so super cool T^T than kyou for writing this T^T there are so many moments i was squealing and then screaming the next sentence xD i needed to take a break every few sentences to calm down xD everyone is so cool and i love it, i love you~! <3 it's amazing how you experiment with all the genres and i'm so happy to be a part of it~ <3

The poster is beautiful!!!!!!!!! T^T I can't help staring at it T^T