To those I've contacted regarding your reviews, do note that you need not resubmit your request (unless there are changes) and that a simple "yep I'd like to still get the review" will do just fine! :
Chapter 7: hi dear! nice to meet you <3 i came across your review portfolio! do you think you'd be willing to review my yunjae fic (highly ) https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1427576/thorned-roses-under-the-moonlight-shade it's a fic i wrote based on my fav manhwa, painter of the night by byeonduck! <333 it would mean a lot to me if you still do and is interested to take on my request ;w; will be waiting for your reply ♥♥♥
Review Form:
Author: parkyume
Co-Author + Link (if any): None. I'm the sole author
Is it rated? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence etc.): There are few non/dub-con scenes and a little bit of physical violence. And every chapter is rated as mature :)
Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): Chaptered. currently on Chapter 6 Pt.1
Ongoing / Completed: Ongoing
How many chapters would you like me to review?
-Until the latest chapter :)
Any questions or tips you'd like to ask/request?
-Can I ask for reviews posted on each chapter as the comment? And you can also post the same review here on the review shop. Reason why I ask for this is, I would like to know whether my story-telling in each chapter is good :3
Have you subscribed?
-Yes dear!
Anything else?
-Can't wait for your constructive criticism!!! <333 Thank you so much for giving me the opportunity! xoxo
Is it rated? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence etc.):No
Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): 11 chapters (technically 10)
Ongoing / Completed: Ongoing
How many chapters would you like me to review?: All
Any questions or tips you'd like to ask/request?: Characterization (especially Yongguk and Mani), dialogue - if it's correctly punctuated or not, overall enjoyment of the story
Have you subscribed?: Yes
Anything else?: I went on a hiatus with this story and I wanna come back to it and I have lots of plans for it. I just want an honest and constructive criticism to see if the story is alright and everything adds up. If the pace is good, if it's enoyable, what I can fix and most importantly are the characters consistent. Are there any characters (Yongguk especially) that is flaky/inconsistent. Thanks so much!
P.S.... I feel like I’m writing/punctuating my dialogue wrong so please please please feel free to educate me and correct me because I want to know.
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