DC Review Shop || Detailed & Constructive || REOPENED! ACCEPTING REQUESTS!

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I know what you're thinking.

"Oh look, another review shop."

Well.

Yes.

...

I've nothing else to say, you're not wrong. Am I better than the rest? That's for you to decide on your own. I'm not here to compete anyway. I do promise one thing. Just as mentioned in the title, my reviews will definitely be detailed and constructive. Why? Because I'm that kind of person - even in real life. Lol.

So a little about me, if that matters:

Am I qualified to criticize your works? Well, professionally no but hey, put your faith in me and I won't let you down. I have confidence in what I'm saying when I review your stories. I decided to offer this service because well, it also helps me criticize my own work better. Sometimes, it takes another person's writing to show you what yours is lacking.

I'm the kind to focus more on the plot and characters rather than the graphics so no, I won't be reviewing your poster. I'm also not one to like grading - it's just not my cup of tea. Grammar and vocabulary wise, I'll go into that too but probably not as detailed UNLESS you ask me to.

I'm open to all genres and characters. Hit me with triggering and rated stories if you want to. I'm down for all kinds of pairings and I accept stories of varying lengths too. Yes, I will review every single chapter in your story so request away sweetie. I review forewords as well! 

HOWEVER, I DO NOT review . If your story isn't from start to finish, then I'll review everything except for the portion with in it. Yes I'm legal but I can't write even if the gods bestowed that power upon me and I don't review what I can't write so...yeah.

When I review a story, I view it as a reader, a writer and of course, a reviewer. So know that you're receiving criticisms from 3 perspectives here. Sometimes, at the end of the review, there'd be a portion where I put my commentary that went on while reading your story so yeah, look forward to that.

Lastly, I'm blunt so I'm sorry if I sound too harsh. I hate sugar-coating. But like I've said, I only offer constructive criticism so no I won't speak without a basis.

Well that's that, you may proceed to the rules.


 

Rules:

1. Subscribing is a must. Upvoting is optional (but hey, that sure would make me happy). You may unsubscribe after getting your review.

2. Because I'm an analytical prick, I might take some time to complete your reviews. Please don't rush me. Thanks in advance, you're a kind soul.

3. If I feel I can't review your story, then I will reject it. Doubt that would happen though.

4. Request as many times as you'd like. Yes, I offer re-dos but only after you've made the necessary changes to your story.

5. Crediting me in your story? Well, if you like my review, why not? I'd like that. But hey, it's all up to you.

6. Feedback on my review would be highly appreciated. I'd like to know if it has helped you in any way.

7. Notify me by commenting once you've seen your review. That way, I can delete your request from the comment section so as to make it easier for me to scroll through other requests.


 

Foreword

Review Form:

Author:

Co-Author + Link (if any):

Title + Link:

Is it rated? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence etc.):

Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.):

Ongoing / Completed:

How many chapters would you like me to review?

Any questions or tips you'd like to ask/request?

Have you subscribed?

Anything else?

 

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To those I've contacted regarding your reviews, do note that you need not resubmit your request (unless there are changes) and that a simple "yep I'd like to still get the review" will do just fine! :

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parkyume
#1
Chapter 7: hi dear! nice to meet you <3 i came across your review portfolio! do you think you'd be willing to review my yunjae fic (highly ) https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1427576/thorned-roses-under-the-moonlight-shade it's a fic i wrote based on my fav manhwa, painter of the night by byeonduck! <333 it would mean a lot to me if you still do and is interested to take on my request ;w; will be waiting for your reply ♥♥♥

Review Form:

Author: parkyume

Co-Author + Link (if any): None. I'm the sole author

Title + Link: Thorned Roses Under the Moonlight Shade (YUNJAE - Rated M) https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1427576/thorned-roses-under-the-moonlight-shade

Is it rated? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence etc.): There are few non/dub-con scenes and a little bit of physical violence. And every chapter is rated as mature :)

Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): Chaptered. currently on Chapter 6 Pt.1

Ongoing / Completed: Ongoing

How many chapters would you like me to review?
-Until the latest chapter :)

Any questions or tips you'd like to ask/request?
-Can I ask for reviews posted on each chapter as the comment? And you can also post the same review here on the review shop. Reason why I ask for this is, I would like to know whether my story-telling in each chapter is good :3

Have you subscribed?
-Yes dear!

Anything else?
-Can't wait for your constructive criticism!!! <333 Thank you so much for giving me the opportunity! xoxo
Moonshiner #2
Hi! Please review!

Author : Moonshiner

Title : Sea in your Eyes
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1411855/sea-in-your-eyes

Non rated , but please note that I deal with false diagnosis and mental health

Chaptered

Ongoing

Just tell me everything that can be better, um, and whether it is all over the place. Thank you!

Love ya and subbed!
XxLittleKittyXx
#3
Review Form:

Author:XxLittleKittyXx

Co-Author + Link (if any): N/A

Title + Link: A Million Reasons Why
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1315872/a-million-reasons-why-hyuna-friendshipandlove-jongupzelo-dreamsandmemories-traineedays-suicidethoughts-newgroup-bapzeloromance-zeloandbap-schoolifeandlove-lifechallenges-sensitivetopic-abusiveparents-reasonswhy-suicideprevention-bobbyxbi-ikon00hanbin-fightingforlove-depressionanxietysuicidal-straykids-leefelix

Is it rated? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence etc.): She is a victim of self harm, but there is none here in the story visibly.

Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): Chaptered

Ongoing / Completed: On Going

How many chapters would you like me to review?: All 5?

Any questions or tips you'd like to ask/request? :3 nope~ You got this love!

Have you subscribed? : Yes :DD

Anything else? : Where have ya been D:?
ddeokbxkkii
#4
Chapter 7: hello, are you still accepting request?
SHAWOLVERSE
#5
Hi! Do you still accept reviews? I am asking because you haven't log in for a while. Are you still busy?
bae-jinki
#6
Author: -Muasbby
https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/15539

Title + Link: Vengeful Romance
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/758094

Is it rated? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence etc.):No

Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): 11 chapters (technically 10)

Ongoing / Completed: Ongoing

How many chapters would you like me to review?: All

Any questions or tips you'd like to ask/request?: Characterization (especially Yongguk and Mani), dialogue - if it's correctly punctuated or not, overall enjoyment of the story

Have you subscribed?: Yes

Anything else?: I went on a hiatus with this story and I wanna come back to it and I have lots of plans for it. I just want an honest and constructive criticism to see if the story is alright and everything adds up. If the pace is good, if it's enoyable, what I can fix and most importantly are the characters consistent. Are there any characters (Yongguk especially) that is flaky/inconsistent. Thanks so much!
P.S.... I feel like I’m writing/punctuating my dialogue wrong so please please please feel free to educate me and correct me because I want to know.
charlislekim
#7
Hello do u accept two chaptered stories??
Moony_Kat
#8
Author: Moony_Kat
Title + Link: With Shadows
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1353588/with-shadows-angst-friendship-romance-schoollife-supernatural-tragedy-ygfamily-firstlove-leehayi-jinwoo-highschoolau-schoolau-jennie-leehi-hanbin-bobby-junhoe-junhwe-ikon-ikonbi
Is it rated? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence etc.): Some of the chapters are rated M for violence, mentions of suicide and bullying
Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): chaptered
Ongoing / Completed: ongoing
How many chapters would you like me to review? all if you don't mind
Any questions or tips you'd like to ask/request? I'd like to know what triggers your attention, what you'd like to find out from what has been only hinted at.
Have you subscribed? Yes
Anything else? Thank you and take you time, no worries^^