Episode 3: Fear

Suspicious Partner | Season 2 (Rewrite in progress)

 

fear

noun

an unpleasant emotion caused by the belief that someone or something
is dangerous, likely to cause pain, or a threat.

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Somewhere outside Seoul,


She doesn't know how long she's been here. Her head is beating a low, dull throb and her wrists feel raw after trying to free them from the ropes. But her movements feel dull and slow and the ropes are too tight. Her eyes have become accustomed to the dark for they never seem to get light where they are in this windowless room. She sees the other two slumped nearby. Asleep or still drugged, she doesn't know. 

The tell-tale sound of the latch clicking warns her that he is coming. She closes her eyes and pretends to be sleeping but her heart beats furiously in panic. Please don't let him pick me, please don't... she thinks desperately.

The sounds of his footsteps echo in the large room, but along with it she hears the squeak of wheels. She risks peeking through her lashes to see him pull something along behind him. He is coming closer to where she is, so she quickly closes her eyes again and tries to slow her breathing; but, her heart is beating wildly and, all of a sudden she feels desperate for air. 

Something heavy is being lifted. She can hear him grunt a little as he moves it. Then a little shuffling sound and all is silent again.

She stays quiet and still, though her breathing still seems too loud to her. A chill runs through her body in the eerie silence.

"You are awake," that voice says and her heartbeat freezes in fear. The footsteps come closer and her heart bursts into panic.

No.... please, no...

Then the pain comes. A sharp sting in her arms. And she's falling, falling, falling into that dark nothingness...

 

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Dear Readers, I'm overdue for an update on this. But as I was writing the chapters I realized this was becoming more of a crime drama and less of a romance story. So I'm rewriting some things and redoing the plot so we can have lots of Eun Bong Hee and No Ji Wook moments. Please bear with me.

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thaciane #1
Chapter 1: Do you go continue the story??? I hope you do :D
thaciane #2
Chapter 6: A really love this fanfic, please continues!!!
rhienz #3
Chapter 6: Take your time, author-nim. Ganbatte!
Will be waiting for your new update.
ShySilver
#4
Chapter 6: Chapter 6 :
New Cuties Intern : Done
Lovely Couple and Fluffy Moment : Done
Creepy Criminal on his way : done
Office Goal : Done
Cutest Pet : Done
So what is coming next ? I'm ready Author-Nim *.*
Is it normal that I find Ji Eun Hyuk and his cat way more cuter than him with Cha Yoo Jung ? X)
currentlyobsessed
#5
Chapter 6: Love the introduction of the new characters. Choco could be the cutest one yet!
jijiandhearts
#6
Chapter 6: Awwww I love Ji Eun Hyuk's character so much. He's the best-est friend you could ever find. I love that Bong Hee asked him to be her witness. & that fluffy cat omg my heart just melts.
I cannot wait for Bong Hee & Ji Wook to get married. They're both lonely without each other. It's time to seal the deal!!! ❤️
Thank you for the two updates ❤️
jijiandhearts
#7
Chapter 5: I'm crying!!!!! Thank you author-nim!!!
ShySilver
#8
Chapter 5: Chapter 5 : I love how you put the different definition/meaning how the word who is going to represent the chapter like the drama did :) Ji Wook how can you forget and being surprised about what happened when you were even not a little bit drunk @_@ ?
77_malou_b #9
Chapter 6: Choco is so adorable.... imagine her having two men at her beck and call.... haha! Thanks for the update, dear author...
77_malou_b #10
Chapter 5: wow, dear author. that was hot ;-) thanks for updating!