Outta Time

Description

Shinhwa AU. Dongwan and Hyesung meet online in their early adulthood, Dongwan's slightly older than Hyesung.

trigger warnings: contains mentions of suicide and depression.

PS: English is not my first language so excuse this mess.

Kinda inspired by Oasis' Outta Time.

 

Foreword

As Churchill said; it's every man's inalienable right to live where the hell he likes. What's it going to do, vanish? Is it not going to be there when I get back?

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cjmoo_ #1
Chapter 2: It's great that we get to see Hyesung's perspective.
I don't really know what to say... Hyesung's a jerk? But then again, sigh I kinda understand his selfish feelings?
Thank you for this.
cjmoo_ #2
Chapter 1: ;_;
What took Hyesung so long to craft out that email :(
Dongwan passed away thinking that it might be his fault that Hyesung didn't contact him :'(
I like how you wrote that Dongwan's the funny, popular guy because depression can happen to anyone.
Candyfloss17 #3
Chapter 1: This was really Amazing.. completely touched my heart.. I wish you would right a part 2 of haesung's perspective. Would really like to read it.
synthbin
#4
Chapter 1: hello lovely, it's henry !
i have no idea what to say, honestly. like i could go on and on about the characterizations (i don't know who these characters are, but you really made the narrator so real, i fell right into him) or the use of first person, which i've never found flattering in fandom but found absolutely perfect and wonderful in this piece; or just the writing in general that i thought was so informative and well written and just so perfect that i honestly forgot i was reading anything. i kept getting further into it and further into it and just dying slowly as each piece of the puzzle was exposed but man . . .. . MAN

what i really wanna talk about is the amount of emotion you put into this. and i could tell right away the hurt you put into this and the life experience and i think that it worked well (sometimes it comes off strange or invasive when people do this, but with this it didn't) and i won't LIE i teared up a couple times. i was listening to timecop's "sky" and "girl" and it really fit well and i just felt so much emotion and i kept getting all blubbery sdkjgh

THIS WAS INCREDIBLE all the way up until the end. i absolutely loved it and you have such a perfect balance between angst and love and i really enjoyed it ;__; thank you for sharing this with me!!! make sure to always share w me ok, and remember that you are loved! and that i think you're great person and i'm happy to have met you ♡