The Exo Planet runs smoothly with the help of the major 4 elements:
Water, Wind, Earth and Fire.
... Or at least that's what everyone thought to be truth.
The Mama Government is hiding something.
Chapter 2: Oh, this is giving me some pathcode teasers vibe! Yknow the bits about the other elements gathering together when the disaster arrives? Or at least that's how I interprete the teasers lol. Honestly, I'm so upset at Mama because why did they keep this a secret from the four for so long? Why did they only decide to tell them now only when the tree of life is so close to dying? Why didn't they tell the others sooner when the crack of death slowly began to appear? I'm so upset like omg this concerns the fate of the planet and if the four exodoriums fail to gather all the elements on time then all lives will perish :( I gotta say that I didn't expect you to dive straight into the main conflict tho hahahaha. Not that it's not a bad thing but it just took me by surprise.
Chapter 1: I'm wondering if the other memberd will appear as the rest hidden elements? It's just a guess but I think that the tree of life probably needs more than the four elements for it to be kept alive. Maybe the four exordiums will venture out to find the rest? The Mama government is sick... Is there any other reason why the four exordiums don't attempt to kill of the governing mama? I mean they're immortals... but there must be a way :(
I really like the description that you wrote for the Earth element. I think that it suits both Kyungsoo and the element very well.
Chapter 2: I don't want to pressure you guys but a month passes by in a jiffy so better hurry up! Hurry up, hurry up! Hurry, hurry up! The clock is ticking!
And ah, find Lay first will yah. Lay! Where art thou, Lay? Suho needs you~
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