Heartbreak Hotel

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Description

Take an aspiring song writer, a rebellious high schooler, a sassy English teacher, a passionate painter and an adventurous tour guide. What’s the same in all of them? They’ve all just had their heart broken.

Foreword

Heartbreak Hotel is a one-shot collection of 5 boys whose heart will never be the same.

SUNGJIN || Congratulations || 1669

DOWOON || I Smile || 1490

YOUNG K || Letting Go || 1755

WONPIL || Colors || 2290

JAE || It Would Have Been || 1028

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lyricalwritings
#1
Chapter 5: I've read this before on Tumblr but I'm back for more because I loved it so much. Rereading it again makes all the words and emotions seem more vivid now and Wonpil's story is definitely my favourite. Using colours to express emotions is so heartbreaking. Thank you for another great series Beth!
Sara_Feli
#2
Chapter 3: I love it but the end is sad TwT
And I was really into the story because the girl is French and I'm French too XD
I love your stories (ok I haven't read them all but for those I read I loved them)!!
jelly888 #3
Chapter 5: My heart has never ached so much reading a fan fic. I haven't even gotten to the part where it happens, but I could already feel so much pain and sadness... I nearly cried if not for reading this at the office *shhhh*

I've spammed the comments already but I just want to say how wonderful your writing style is. Now I want to curl up in bed and listen to Day6 and be emo...

Thank you <3
jelly888 #4
Chapter 4: I love Colors so much and wow this one is so good! Thank you for writing such lovely stories (even though they're heart wrenching). You make me feel feels T_T <3
jelly888 #5
Chapter 3: </33333 wow that was painful but still so good T_T
jelly888 #6
Chapter 2: Dowoon's story is sooo good. I love the interpretation of I Smile and they way it's written :')
rion_01 #7
Chapter 5: I really like the last few sentences; Jae's 'our'. It makes the story much more heartbreaking. Yeah, I thought of the song in the same meaning apart from a breakup. Death can be so painful when it involves our precious loved ones.. Great job for this one as well. Well, if I had to choose my fav story, I'd say Brian's my fav^^. The untold confession... Anyway, thanks so much for sharing with us. I was a bit sad when I saw the 'C' mark on this story but it was a great journey. Good luck for your future stories!
Forfirith
#8
Chapter 5: Wth nooooooooooo I was not ready. I'm still not ready. Whyyyyyyy
This is so painful =(
On the other hand, very well written (as always biasmate!) I honestly love reading your interpretations of all the songs. I always listen to them when I'm reading and it gives them a whole new meaning!
Kathys
#9
Chapter 5: You just legit broke my heart. Just imagining him like this, all alone, sick and grieving, it really hit home and I just wanted to bury myself into my bed and cry. It was so sad. Death is always so unfair, it happenes so adruptly, neither of them could prepare for something like that. It was the most heartbreaking part. Even though they were together for years, they were happy but they still had so many things ahead of them but now, he was all alone. I loved that we learnt all these cute things about them, how they met, how much they loved each other, all those writings on the fridge, their cute dog, the couple things, the mugs, they were so perfect together, it hurt. And it hurt like that fate was so so ruthless to them. No wonder why 'our' meant so much to Jae. It really left an impact on me. Oh god.
I don't know if it's because I read it now but I think this is the saddest and the best one out of the collection. Though, I loved them all, I loved suffering with you and I'm both happy and sad that it's the end. I'm hoping for more happy Day6 stories because they absolutely deserve it and I will never get bored of your wonderful and creative writing! <3
rion_01 #10
Chapter 4: I'm guessing that Wonpil is having depression. The way he views life, the pessimism, it makes me sad as well... The girl's appearance shone some light in his life but too bad, it didn't end in a good way. Well, this series are angsty, so I was already prepared for the heartbreak. Anyway, she should have tried to get to know Wonpil and his depression even though he never told her anything. To me, relationship means both parties have to try to keep each other together and both didn't strive, so both are at fault. How sad... He should get professional help because depression is like a parasite; it all of you, physically and emotionally.
I'm loving the oneshots btw. Keep it up and I'm looking forward to the next story. Fighting!