Mistakes They Did [one-shot]

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Mistakes They Did [one-shot]

Foreword

Hi everybody! Well this is the first time I'm posting my fic here. It's a one shot about Suyin. Hope you all will enjoy it. This is my first fanfic ever so I would really appreciate some comments. Thanks!^^

Sneak peek:

"She deserves it. She started all this..."

"Talk to me!" "I have nothing to say to you."

"Never say any other man's name on this
bed. I get jealous!"

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xAnnieRyeowookx
#1
cool.
kpoints #2
suyin! makes me happy :)
mystify_strawberry #3
kyuhyunlover: thanks! Yeah i know it's really hard to find suyin fics nowadays... I'll try to make more suyin fics but can't guarantee it'll finish soon...
kyuhyunlover #4
:O another suyin fanfic! its hard to find alot of these on aff now T^T <br />
i like your story its so cute! i would have never guessed that she had aborted her baby i thought she cheated on him! <br />
please continue to write suyin fanfics!
mystify_strawberry #5
thank you LyGiaMy!<br />
You know what? You're officially my first reader that actually commented...<br />
And you're so sweet^^<br />
I'm definitely going to make lots and lots more of Suyin fic!<br />
ahahah... 'inserted his ahemtongueahem in there' lol I should have put that too...
SpeechofSilence
#6
Oh my, why didn't I see this?! This is so cute! Man, gave me mini heart attacks. SO CUTE! They went through a lot. Ri In had once aborted their baby. Poor Ri In.<br />
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“Then be mine.” OMG! I nearly fainted at that! Aw, I never knew Junsu could be so cute!<br />
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“Be mine. You said you don’t have feeling towards Yoochun. So be my girl. I can’t stand seeing you around other men any longer.” This too! 'be my girl' is just wow. Junsu speaking with so much confidence!<br />
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"Junsu was kissing her earlobe. Damn! He knew she was sensitive around that area!" My my, such a cute scene! Junsu is so erted! But cute! Should have inserted his ahemtongueahem in there.<br />
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Luckily, Yoochun got over it. That's nice. And LOL the last part. Yep, Yoochun percert 100%! LOL cheeky.<br />
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Well, I do hope you will continue making more SuYin fics and stay here! Don't go! I'll be waiting!