day fifty six

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Byun Baekhyun, day fifty six 21:22

I’ve been locked in my room for three days. Three days with no outside contact. I haven’t even heard Haneul during this entrapment. I guess I’ve been having some form of fever dreams. Must be a side-effect of solitude. Could it be that this is my punishment for trying to break out? I wouldn’t be surprised, this isn’t exactly a resort.
I could’ve sworn that I heard Junmyeon’s voice outside my room at one point. He was telling me to come with them. They were waiting for me and if I didn’t open the door in ten seconds they would leave me behind. He practically begged me to open the door but I couldn’t. My powers weren’t strong enough. Next thing I knew, I was lying on the floor by the door, my feet were still wrapped in the covers. Thankfully the issued night attire kept my back warm against the cold floor.
The first thing I noticed when I stood up was a slightly scorched door. That and the fact that it looked like I burned a me-shaped mark into the floor. It terrified me. Everything is starting to terrify me.
It feels like someone’s watching me all the time and I just want to crawl into a hole and hide until they leave. But they can’t leave if they were never here to begin with. Just like I can’t leave unless they let me.


Extremely short update since I have the tiniest bit of free time. Sorry I couldn't give you guys a longer update but only 2 weeks until finals are over so I'll be back full-time soon. Hope this filler gives you some insight into this story.

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vampwrrr
#1
Chapter 25: Dude! This is easily the best and most sinister Lucky One story that I have ever read. I wholeheartedly support a sequel!
strvwberri
#2
Chapter 25: Yooooo I was away from aff for a while but I finally got back to reading my subscriptions and omg!! This story is amazing!!! it’s so unique and the writing style is so different, the ending was amazing well not for baek’s sake lmao, I was totally not expecting that! I loved it sm <3
Yaone_L #3
Chapter 25: Wow. Great mamaau story. Loves the writing style. It's very refreshing to read like a diary.
Softballgrl13811 #4
Chapter 25: Oh my heart dropped as soon as I saw "day one". Such a great story omg! Thank you for making it come to life!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I am sad that they are stuck in the endless loop. But hopefully they will break out eventually.
Softballgrl13811 #5
Chapter 24: Oh my god!!!!! Noooooooooo!!!! The poor babies!!! Wow.. multiple times and yet their families still have no idea! I want to cry for their suffering and it is only going to start again! Oh man I am dying to know what will happen next and if something will change for them. ♡♡♡♡♡♡
Softballgrl13811 #6
Chapter 23: Oh no!!!!! It is starting all over.. hopefully it is one of the boys just keeping an eye on baek. Oh my heart breaks for them right now!!! Can't wait to find out how things are going to go down =) just wanted to say thanks for writing such an awesome story. I love it when someone can bring such an idea to life and spin it so creatively. Don't change!!!! You are AWESOME!!! ♡♡♡♡♡ (Everyone needs a little love and encouragement every so often)
Philosophies
#7
Chapter 1: WELL THAT WAS CREEPY
Philosophies
#8
The description of this is really cool!
Softballgrl13811 #9
Chapter 21: But.. but... Chen and lay?! Did they make it? Will they all see each other again? So many questions!!!!!!!! I hope there are some answers next time... maybe just one? Please? =)