soft [sun side]

Description

it wasn’t a world she expected herself to be in

Foreword

companion piece

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Sammeup
#1
Chapter 3: I love all of your imagery and figurative language for this story, it emphasizes the romance in my opinion :)
Ah4Rae #2
Chapter 3: Great Author!!! I was waiting for this moment, so cute. Update soon !!
KSeobang #3
Chapter 2: Tell me this won't be an angst.. right? Seems like Byul loves Yongsun too much.. and Yongsun.. wants her attention or such. Idk man.

irl, Moonsun is so easy to understand cause of their actions towards one another yet so complicated cause we really don't know the meaning behind their actions....
arshuckle #4
Chapter 2: it's just so good you make so clear what I spent like 15 fanfics trying to get right. that Yongsun is just kind of insecure and unsteady and having Byul there, to literally hold onto her, but also to validate her, and compliment her, and make her feel like she deserves the things she has... its definitely something Yongsun has gotten attached to whether she intended to or not, and that's so real?

and on byul' side, having Yongsun be idk, so compliant? so easygoing, so genuine, so receptive. like imagine how many no's she got while trying to hack it in this career? but no matter what byul does, how annoying she gets, how embarrassed yongsun would be if she did that stupid dog impression one more time, she just never says no? she's always there and even though the feelings seem ambiguous coming from yong's side, it's clear that no matter what, even if byul is being annoying or too obvious or w/e, yongsun never actually rejects her? with yong it's more about seeing what she doesn't do, as opposed to what she does...
arshuckle #5
Chapter 2: I still like this, speaking as a writer, chapter 2 is usually where it all goes to hell lmao. keep writing please!