Dandelions

Description

Dandelions is a flower where she believes that will grant everyone wishes and so she always pick one, wishing all her might and blows the dust away, hoping her wish will come true. It was her last day and she wanted to spend some time with her room mate  who is a blind man that she pity, he liked her and she liked him but it didn't goes as it was planned because she donates her eyes to him and there, she wouldn't be with him like he wanted...

Foreword

Warning-English is not first language so please don't bash on my story here, I'm a human too, my grammar is not the best if you think my story is stupid please exit this page now, I will have spelling mistake and errors mistake. Thank you oh and no bad comments, I already know that my stories is not the best.

Jenny Thao
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This story here is original by me so I didn't copy anyone but will have similar story line like every one else.
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~Forewords~
~This is after chp 1~

I know a girl who once believes in dandelions, she believes that these dandelions grant people wishes and it really did.It brings so many wishes that I wish it will vanish away but it never did and so it never came true either when I wish for something very simple. I am frustrated because she left me all alone in this world, knowing that her wish will come true, she left me behind with nothing but a video and a picture of us holding dandelions while smiling to the camera. It made me felt pain for the very first time and I didn't like it one bit; it has made me felt like I stole something from her. Why it has to be her when I wanted to see her the most of all the people? Do you know how painful to see the one you love gone by your sight when all I remember is what she says to me, "I'll be by your side forever." She lied to me, she didn't want to stay by my side forever, she wanted to disappear and so I could painfully, desperately beg god to make her come back yet I know that she wouldn't; it would be a horror to see her once again and I know it's impossible to see her again because I know she wouldn't come back a-....

chp 1 will be in her p.o.v but towards the end will be his p.o.v

comment please thank you

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kpopartory
#1
Chapter 1: Touchingly sad, nice writing, keep up the good work!

found this in the 'random story'
Iloveexo985530
#2
Ciuduenciednihcnihdnchi soooo I. Love with this story
pinkaddict #3
Chapter 1: another awesome story! :DD
allminsarehandsome
#4
wah . . this is . .
awesome.
madz67
#5
made me cry hard...<br />
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<333~!
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leedictator #7
Omgosh ~! This is a beautiful story! I loved it!
leedictator #8
This sounds good so far ~! Update soon!