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for the third time, he rose from his deep chair to pace the length of the room. he felt bored, deeply rooted. well, it could be thus for the other day with an entry of 100 million won in his bankbook, he had at last acquired his million, the goal of his life. and now, with nothing more to strive for intensely, he was like a runner who had run his race and had nowhere to go. it was time, he thought, that he should make use of that million; he might travel around the world.

 

but he always thinks a girl named kyungsoo had she missed him? had she cried? or if she’s finding him?

all these are questions bothered him every day, sometimes he smile when he remembered the most unforgettable moment he shared with her. but he was thinking what he did 10 years ago, running away from home had not been a good way, he reflected. It had hurt to leave his old parents and rest of the family, his boyhood friends and the girl he loved

 

suddenly, a wave of homesickness overpowered him. he stood up abruptly. “i am going home,” he told himself, “i am going home!”

 

“faster” he urged his chauffer, although the big limousine was now doing more than a hundred and the country-side fleeted past the glass window in blurred shadows of posts and trees. fast as the car ran, however, it was sunset when it drew to a stop to the chapel of a small town of Boseong.

 

alighting form the car, he stood rooted beside it for a while as he tried to see in the present community the old one he had remembered. nothing seemed familiar. but then after 10 years of being away surely everything has change. the wide farm before now become a wide subdivision even the playground where he and his friends used to stay before is gone everything is different.

'hello mister are you new in this place?' he heard a voice of a kid say beside him. 'oh no I used to live here when i was in my junior days like you' he reply and smile to the child 

'oh that's great ibam sure you missed a lot of events here' 'yes i missed a lot' he says and smile to the boy 

'i can tour you around so you can be familiar again to this place' the boy suggested 'sure but your parents they will be worried if they can't find you' he said

'they might but we know everyone in this place and you're a good guy, right?' the chlid asked 'of course i am' 

the boy toured jong in in their village and even share some stories to him, when they are in the food stand to rest the boy pointed on the flower field not that is located near the village 

'that is the place where my dad proposed to my mom' he said and point to the tree next 'and the place my mom told me where the boy she loved in the past confessed to her' he said and continue to eat

jong in suddenly remember kyungsoo is she fine and where is she right now

'my dad told me that the boy mom loved before hurt him big time imagine the day he left is supposedly the day she will confess to him but yeah he leaves' the boy told him and continue to eat

after they eat they continue their tour and the boy drag him to the school which is more better now than before

'this is our last stop my school, oh wait a minute you used to stay here so do you attend this school too?' the boy said 'and sorry by the way my name is jong min i don't introduce my name because i

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banglo_
#1
Chapter 3: Wow.. both endings are prettty much sad. I guess I prefer the second ending since kyungsoo is happy with a child and a supportive husband. Jongin can still visit her, so that’s a plus.
KaiOlly
#2
Chapter 2: Wow... bOth of the ending is just so....sad.. And broken .... I dont kno which ending i prefer... Maybe the original one?
KaiOlly
#3
Chapter 1: Well that's what you get for chasing a dream that's like a run, Kim Jongin...
Ouhh love ur layout btw! How'd u do it?
Justme10
#4
Can you make another part where kyungsoo did not die and maybe faked her death?