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Description

Welcome. Here, I offer detailed Chapter by Chapter reviews for free. I will talk about your character development, plot, flow, grammar and basically anything I personally find helpful to you as a writer. Not only that, I also offer Beta-Reading Services, however at a charge of 5 karma points per chapter (foreword is free). In the case you are new and do not have enough karma points, you may personally message me and we'll see what can be done.

Should you want to request for a review or beta-reading service, do fill up the respective forms through the comments section. However, be sure to read the rules first before requesting. If you have any questions, all you got to do is ask either through the comments section or private message. :)


 

Rules / Things You Need to Know:

1. Subscription is mandatory. Upvotes are optional but appreciated. You may unsubscribe upon completion of your review or beta-reading request.

2. I might take some time to complete your request so please do not rush me, especially if there are many chapters in your story.

3. Should I feel I am unable to tend to your request (highly unlikely), I will reject it.

4. Accepted Pairings: Boy x Girl, Boy x Boy, Girl x Girl, Idol x Idol, Idol x OC, OC x OC

5. Characters / Groups I accept: All

6. I accept ALL genres, EXCEPT . Other rated content is accepted. Should your story not entirely revolve around , I will tend to the rest and leave out the respective portions.

7. Request as many times as you'd like to. Re-Dos are allowed only once you've made the necessary changes. No chapter limit for either requests.

8. Crediting is optional for reviews but mandatory for beta-reading services, solely because I feel that there aren't many beta-readers on this platform so I would like to help out those in search of one. For reviews, a feedback in return would be much appreciated.

9. To those requesting beta-reading services, do keep in mind that I will not post the edited chapters on this shop. Instead, you would have to send me your chapters either by email (through M-Word) or Google Docs. Also, the chapters do not require to be posted yet. Your story can be in draft mode. However, I do require temporary access in order to see if I'm able to accept your request.

10. If you would like me to be your permanent personal beta-reader, you may approach me through private message.

11. I do review forewords.

12. A note to those requesting beta-reading services: I will not take requests for those who already have beta-readers. I am fine with beta-reading your work once your current editor edits it but if I have to edit it the same time as your current editor on the same platform, that would be a no-no for me. This is simply because we might have differing opinions on certain things and well this should be self-explanatory.

13. Please leave a comment upon picking up your review.


 

Request Form (Review):

- Author:

- Co-Author + Profile Link (if any):

- Story Title + Link:

- Genre:

- Does it contain Rated content? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence, triggers etc):

- Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.):

- Ongoing / Completed:

- Characters:

- How many chapters would you like me to review?

- Any questions or tips you'd like to request?

- Have you subscribed?

- Anything else?


 

Request Form (Beta-Reading):

- Author:

- Story Title + Link:

- Genre:

- Does it contain rated content? If yes, state type:

- Characters:

- How many chapters would you like me to beta-read?

- Have you subscribed?

- Anything else?

Foreword

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Hey guys! Sorry I haven't been tending to your requests! My workload has been piling up in real life and I had to go on a hiatus but I'm back now :)

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LetMeTortureU
#1
review request
- Author: letmetortureu
- Co-Author + Profile Link (if any): (https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1385505)
- Story Title + Link: 사랑하니까 (Because I Love You) (https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1283817/because-i-love-you-angst-illness-mpreg-kaisoo)
- Genre: angst
- Does it contain Rated content? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence, triggers etc): no
- Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): Oneshot
- Ongoing / Completed: Ongoing
- Characters: EXO ( KAISOO- Kai Kyungsoo )
- How many chapters would you like me to review?: Only one Chapter.
- Any questions or tips you'd like to request?: Tips for plot or story flow since i'm not too familiar with how to arrange it yet , character development is also needed cause i cant make the character be more realistic? idk how to explain it but yeah..its was somethin similar with that. Other than that can you give me tips for my style of writing...i want to make it short but ending up with a long paragaraph,im afraid the content will go to far than what i planned it should be. . and the last one is about how im using english words..for example,if the emotion or the situation that i describe sounds weirds or dont usually used.
- Have you subscribed? Yess! im usually subscribe wheneever i visit stories or pages
- Anything else? : Since I'm not a native English speaker so my writing is not really good and i cant find to use the right words to describe thing in english except in my own language,malays. and yea..are u available to be a co-author too? if yes,i would be really grateful for that. i hope you can help and inform me asap.
ali060903
#2
review request
- Author: ali060903
- Co-Author + Profile Link (if any): https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1184992
- Story Title + Link: Love Potions, https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1219300/love-potions-fantasy-fluff-jaemin-originalcharacter-jisung-jeno-marklee-nct-haechan-nctdream-chenle-renjun
- Genre: fantasy, fluff, comedy
- Does it contain Rated content? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence, triggers etc): no
- Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): Chaptered
- Ongoing / Completed: Ongoing
- Characters: NCT Dream ( Mark Lee, Lee Jeno,...), Lina (OC) and other minor OCs and Kpop artists
- How many chapters would you like me to review? Until now, I've got 7 chap so please review all 7. Thanks
- Any questions or tips you'd like to request? Tips for description, showing rather than telling, character development, story flow, grammar or style of writing. Idk why but the view is declining through each chap and there are not many comments so can you help me improve to get more recognition? Thanks.
- Have you subscribed? Yess!
- Anything else? Since I'm not a native English speaker so my writing is not really good.
arxblanc
#3
Chapter 2: Hello, I just wondering if you still accept a beta reader request? :)
minleo #4
- Author: Minleo
- Co-Author + Profile Link (if any): https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/767016
- Story Title + Link: The Colour of Emotion https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1125570/the-colour-of-emotion-angst-gang-mafia-romance-violence-bts-got7
- Genre: Angst, Gang, Romance
- Does it contain Rated content? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence, triggers etc): Violence, Suicide attempt, Abuse, mention of drugs
- Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): Chaptered
- Ongoing / Completed: Ongoing
- Characters: All of BTS, all of GOT7, OC (Choi Saerom), and other minor OCs
- How many chapters would you like me to review? 11, please ^^'
- Any questions or tips you'd like to request? Just your honest opinion.
- Have you subscribed? Yesh. :3
- Anything else? No, thank you. ^^
snowblush
#5
Chapter 2: - Author: snowblush

- Co-Author + Profile Link (if any): http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1438142

- Story Title + Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1206539/scars-fantasy-exo-bap-baekhyun-daehyun-bts-taehyung

- Genre: fantasy

- Does it contain Rated content? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence, triggers etc): No

- Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): chaptered

- Ongoing / Completed: ongoing

- Characters: kim taehyung, byun baekhyun, jung daehyun

- How many chapters would you like me to review? one :)

- Any questions or tips you'd like to request? yes!

- Have you subscribed? Yes!

- Anything else? just be comfortable :)
natassa
#6
Chapter 2: Request Form (Beta-Reading):

- Author: Natassa
- Story Title + Link: BTS and Her http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1081181/bts-and-her-bts-parkjimin-bangtanboys-kimnamjoon-kimtaehyung-minyoongi-kimseokjin
- Genre: Drama, romance
- Does it contain rated content? If yes, state type: No.
- Characters: all BTS member
- How many chapters would you like me to beta-read? 6 chapter. I have 20 chapters and please help me on chapter 15 - 20. if u interst in it, I will send u the story by email or by message.
- Have you subscribed? Yes, of course!
- Anything else? I'm a beginner. I'm not a native english. My grammar really bad tho. Please help me for it. Thank you.
Silver_Light
#7
Beta-Reading Form:

- Author: Silver_Light
- Story Title + Link: Seeking You + http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1145288/seeking-you-gangs-romance-exok-exom-luhan-sehun-highschoolau
- Genre: gangs and mafia, romance, slight angst.
- Does it contain rated content? If yes, state type: violence, bad language.
- Characters: Luhan, Sena (OC) and EXO
- How many chapters would you like me to beta-read? 10
- Have you subscribed? Yes
- Anything else? Thanks in advanace!!
potatoonfire #8
Review request:
- Author: potatoonfire
- Story Title + Link: The Serpent in the Crest
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1102708/the-serpent-in-the-crest-fantasy-minho-onew-romance-shinee-exo-sehun
- Genre: fantasy, action, angst, mystery, romance
- Does it contain Rated content? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence, triggers etc): No.
- Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): Chaptered.
- Ongoing / Completed: ongoing
- Characters: SHINee's minho, jonghyun, onew, Exo's Sehun.
- How many chapters would you like me to review? 4 (and foreword, please ;-;)
- Any questions or tips you'd like to request? This is my first work here on AFF and I don't seem to have many readers or comments, so I would really appreciate some help to improve the story. Let me know what I can do to appeal more to the readers; I request constructive criticism because I need to know where I am lacking. Thank you in advance.
- Have you subscribed? Yes.
- Anything else? Thank you, thank you. ;-;