Beta-Reading | An Unknown Loss

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Title: An Unknown Loss

Description: Discovering a long lost sibling who's an international idol was not her plan. Falling in love with said idol's best friend wasn't the plan either/ But the more time she spends circling the outskirts of the kpop industry, the more she realizes those are the least of her worries.

Genre: Realistic Fiction, Romance, Drama, Slight Comedy

Characters: Park Chanyeol, Byun Baekhyun, Other EXO Members, Cheong Aeri [OC], Cameo Idols

Type: Chaptered

Status: Ongoing

Beta-Reading: In Progress

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LetMeTortureU
#1
review request
- Author: letmetortureu
- Co-Author + Profile Link (if any): (https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1385505)
- Story Title + Link: 사랑하니까 (Because I Love You) (https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1283817/because-i-love-you-angst-illness-mpreg-kaisoo)
- Genre: angst
- Does it contain Rated content? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence, triggers etc): no
- Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): Oneshot
- Ongoing / Completed: Ongoing
- Characters: EXO ( KAISOO- Kai Kyungsoo )
- How many chapters would you like me to review?: Only one Chapter.
- Any questions or tips you'd like to request?: Tips for plot or story flow since i'm not too familiar with how to arrange it yet , character development is also needed cause i cant make the character be more realistic? idk how to explain it but yeah..its was somethin similar with that. Other than that can you give me tips for my style of writing...i want to make it short but ending up with a long paragaraph,im afraid the content will go to far than what i planned it should be. . and the last one is about how im using english words..for example,if the emotion or the situation that i describe sounds weirds or dont usually used.
- Have you subscribed? Yess! im usually subscribe wheneever i visit stories or pages
- Anything else? : Since I'm not a native English speaker so my writing is not really good and i cant find to use the right words to describe thing in english except in my own language,malays. and yea..are u available to be a co-author too? if yes,i would be really grateful for that. i hope you can help and inform me asap.
ali060903
#2
review request
- Author: ali060903
- Co-Author + Profile Link (if any): https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1184992
- Story Title + Link: Love Potions, https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1219300/love-potions-fantasy-fluff-jaemin-originalcharacter-jisung-jeno-marklee-nct-haechan-nctdream-chenle-renjun
- Genre: fantasy, fluff, comedy
- Does it contain Rated content? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence, triggers etc): no
- Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): Chaptered
- Ongoing / Completed: Ongoing
- Characters: NCT Dream ( Mark Lee, Lee Jeno,...), Lina (OC) and other minor OCs and Kpop artists
- How many chapters would you like me to review? Until now, I've got 7 chap so please review all 7. Thanks
- Any questions or tips you'd like to request? Tips for description, showing rather than telling, character development, story flow, grammar or style of writing. Idk why but the view is declining through each chap and there are not many comments so can you help me improve to get more recognition? Thanks.
- Have you subscribed? Yess!
- Anything else? Since I'm not a native English speaker so my writing is not really good.
arxblanc
#3
Chapter 2: Hello, I just wondering if you still accept a beta reader request? :)
minleo #4
- Author: Minleo
- Co-Author + Profile Link (if any): https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/767016
- Story Title + Link: The Colour of Emotion https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1125570/the-colour-of-emotion-angst-gang-mafia-romance-violence-bts-got7
- Genre: Angst, Gang, Romance
- Does it contain Rated content? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence, triggers etc): Violence, Suicide attempt, Abuse, mention of drugs
- Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): Chaptered
- Ongoing / Completed: Ongoing
- Characters: All of BTS, all of GOT7, OC (Choi Saerom), and other minor OCs
- How many chapters would you like me to review? 11, please ^^'
- Any questions or tips you'd like to request? Just your honest opinion.
- Have you subscribed? Yesh. :3
- Anything else? No, thank you. ^^
snowblush
#5
Chapter 2: - Author: snowblush

- Co-Author + Profile Link (if any): http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/1438142

- Story Title + Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1206539/scars-fantasy-exo-bap-baekhyun-daehyun-bts-taehyung

- Genre: fantasy

- Does it contain Rated content? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence, triggers etc): No

- Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): chaptered

- Ongoing / Completed: ongoing

- Characters: kim taehyung, byun baekhyun, jung daehyun

- How many chapters would you like me to review? one :)

- Any questions or tips you'd like to request? yes!

- Have you subscribed? Yes!

- Anything else? just be comfortable :)
natassa
#6
Chapter 2: Request Form (Beta-Reading):

- Author: Natassa
- Story Title + Link: BTS and Her http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1081181/bts-and-her-bts-parkjimin-bangtanboys-kimnamjoon-kimtaehyung-minyoongi-kimseokjin
- Genre: Drama, romance
- Does it contain rated content? If yes, state type: No.
- Characters: all BTS member
- How many chapters would you like me to beta-read? 6 chapter. I have 20 chapters and please help me on chapter 15 - 20. if u interst in it, I will send u the story by email or by message.
- Have you subscribed? Yes, of course!
- Anything else? I'm a beginner. I'm not a native english. My grammar really bad tho. Please help me for it. Thank you.
Silver_Light
#7
Beta-Reading Form:

- Author: Silver_Light
- Story Title + Link: Seeking You + http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1145288/seeking-you-gangs-romance-exok-exom-luhan-sehun-highschoolau
- Genre: gangs and mafia, romance, slight angst.
- Does it contain rated content? If yes, state type: violence, bad language.
- Characters: Luhan, Sena (OC) and EXO
- How many chapters would you like me to beta-read? 10
- Have you subscribed? Yes
- Anything else? Thanks in advanace!!
potatoonfire #8
Review request:
- Author: potatoonfire
- Story Title + Link: The Serpent in the Crest
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1102708/the-serpent-in-the-crest-fantasy-minho-onew-romance-shinee-exo-sehun
- Genre: fantasy, action, angst, mystery, romance
- Does it contain Rated content? If yes, please state type (self-harm, violence, triggers etc): No.
- Type (Chaptered / Oneshot etc.): Chaptered.
- Ongoing / Completed: ongoing
- Characters: SHINee's minho, jonghyun, onew, Exo's Sehun.
- How many chapters would you like me to review? 4 (and foreword, please ;-;)
- Any questions or tips you'd like to request? This is my first work here on AFF and I don't seem to have many readers or comments, so I would really appreciate some help to improve the story. Let me know what I can do to appeal more to the readers; I request constructive criticism because I need to know where I am lacking. Thank you in advance.
- Have you subscribed? Yes.
- Anything else? Thank you, thank you. ;-;