Cave

Tick Tack, Tick Tack (sequel to Club Neverland)

 

 
{Hoon}
Hmmm... If we just ask for it then we could probably find something else to help us..
 
I whispered softly, "Hello, could anyone help us here?" and waited for a response.
 
I heard a phoenix cry, and wings flapping. I felt it land on my shoulder. "At your service, Prince Hoon." it bowed a little.
 
"Thank you for helping us, is there a way to get light in here?" I asked.
 
"Yes, here you go." it blew fire onto three torches that I didn't even see..
 
"Thank you phoenix."
 
We walked forward into the cave and right away we ran into three pathways.
 
"Which way shall we go?" Kevin asked out loud.
 
"You walk as if you read. If you walk the way you read, your journey will be over." Dara's sweet singsong voice was back, but I was sure I could detect a hint of venom in it.
 
"She liesss.." the phoenix said. "You have to walk the way Americans read. Not the way we do."
 
"What do you mean?" I asked.
 
"Hoon, we read from right to left. I'm sure there was more pathway forks in fact, there's probably two more isn't there, phoenix?" AJ asked.
 
"Yes, there is.."
 
"So if we go from the way we read it would be right pathway then middle then left. But phoenix says Dara is lying. We should go the way Americans read. They read from left to right. So we should go left, middle and then right." AJ said but he also seemed to ask the phoenix to make sure he was right.
 
"Yes, that is correct, Prince AJ." the phoenix said.
 
"Great, let's go!" I led the way, with our phoenix friend on my shoulder.
 
{Dara}
What is up with these random creatures helping them!!!!!
 
They aren't supposed to get help!!
 
They're supposed to figure out for themselves!!!
 
This is cheating!!!
 
Umma!!
 
Can you hear me?
 
The boys are cheating!!
 
Yes my dear I know. Let me go see Joon okay?
 
Thank you umma.
 
{Kiseop}
Dara seemed even angrier than she did earlier.
 
She's probably mad that we figured out the riddles so quickly..
 
Author's Note:
Hey hey guys,
sorry didn't update this last night.
i REALLY wanted to write the chapter i was tagged in...
for ROCKETBOXX COLLAB FIC!!
THANK YOU MOMO UNNI!! :D I tried... ><;
anyway, i chose a phoenix this time.. :D
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kyuhyunlover28
#1
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ninetyninestars
#2
Chapter 19: Aww when I was reading the 1st few chapters I had a hunch that it'd be Soohyun who loves her the most cos he seemed the most determined to find her :") what makes it seem more surreal is that Soohyun in real life, gives me that kind of vibe...as though he's not too showy with his feelings, letting others stand out instead of him, being a leader and all, so I definitely love the idea that you chose him <3 aiyee im so into your story!! Btw, I actually thought AJ was your bias given all the chapters you wrote about him in Club Neverland ;) hehe
Whimsical_Princess #3
Chapter 36: Awesome story
Rianne2580 #4
@CHINGU :) hehehe :3 <3 thank you <3 I love you <3

@houaavangg :) hehe :3 Everyone gets on thank you list at the time of completion :) <3 hehe :3
And yup :) I had to bring Joon back ;D And yup :) 7 kids :) one for each of them ;D
Thank you for loving this <3
houaavangg #5
I loved how you made her have 7 kids ! I also loved how you put joon in the ending too ! but , anyways ; keep it up ! hwaiting ! && , I'm suprised I'm on the thank you list ! well , thank you too and I love you too !! Thanks for creating club neverland and the sequel !! <3
Rianne2580 #6
@Maii210 aww.. thank you :)

@elishaed hehe :3 thank you~ <3 And lol~ perhaps so. Thank you~ :) I'm just a tiny bit selfish of course which is why this popped into my head. XD
elishaed
#7
I absolutely loved this whole story! It's so cute and interesting! Ahaha the boys must constantly get jealous of each other! Anyways, great idea for a story!
Maii210 #8
I just finished both stories. It's really good :D
Rianne2580 #9
Aww... thank you~
Umm.. I guess I didn't explain it well enough~ It was supposed to be like they were so busy on business trips that they didn't really care for Eun Mi.. :o