i thought the beginning could have been stronger if it was a bit~ clearer. i was kinda confused in the first half of the story, debating on whether i should go on cause i thought this was a minkey fanfic -___- (kind of afraid of /gay fanfics...)<br />
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anyway i like the concept of the story :)<br />
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the story's just... intruiging and different.<br />
Minho, in love with his best friend's fiance, knowing it's a sin, but still going on with it<br />
Key, most likely clueless to everything, marrying a woman cheating on him<br />
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gah. if i was the girl i'd feel horrible too.
Oh, Minho~. *insert sadface here*<br />
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I read this the day you posted it, but I was too tired and stressed to comment so I decided to leave it for another time [which is today XD]. Besides, it wouldn't be right to give a half assed comment in general.<br />
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Anyway. Minho as an anti-hero! I like~ XD Logically, what he's done is something not everybody approves of because he had a choice not to give in to temptation and nurse the feelings he harbors for his best friend's girlfriend. He knew she was taken and yet he let his emotion cloud his rationality which, in turn, made the girl have a change of heart and give in as well. But on the flip side, sometimes people do not choose or ask who they fall for. Perhaps he just happened to have been caught in a situation where he found the right person at the wrong time, therefore making their love "wrong". [Although who's to say if a love is wrong or right is another issue altogether because this can always be interpreted differently by people.]<br />
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I feel sorry for Key and Minho's girlfriend because they have no idea that the people they love have stabbed them in the back. But just the same, Minho and the love interest are also victims of this unfortunate predicament.<br />
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This reminds me so much of a one-shot I wrote in the past with a marginal difference in length XD But the length of this story is good as it is; it's not as long but it explains enough. I'm not a fan of John Mayer so I have no idea what the song sounds like/is about, but the title is truly fitting if only for Minho's situation in this even if he is the protagonist of the story. The angel and devil reference is nicely tied in and I thought at first a good portion of the fic would dwell on it, making me a bit wary because this is just one of those references that, aside from being overused, irks me a lot because it tends to get fatally cheesy when not done right ^^;;<br />
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Twas a good read. Thank you for sharing~ ^^
OKAAAAAAY! I finally understand now. And this time, even though I had read it already O_O I. Am. Speechless. And I think there's a paaaa-iiiin in my heart. *SNIFFS.<br />
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GOOD. GOOD. GOOD. <br />
LOVE IT AS ALWAYS <3<br />
hehee noope it's actually one POV, Minho's..<br />
'You' is the girl Minho really loves, and also Key's girlfriend.<br />
while the other girl near the end is Minho's real girlfriend..<br />
im sooo sorry if i made you or the other reader confused.
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