~Character introduction~

The Fight Between Bloodlines

        

Im Yoona

The cold and harsh team leader.

Age: 18

Rank: Guardian.

 

Jessica Jung

The confident yet  insecure brat.

Age: 18

Rank: Commoner

 

Tiffany Hwang 

The friendly, eye smiling counselor.

Age: 17

Rank: Guardian

 

Krystal Jung

The blunt, over excited drama queen.

Age: 16

Rank: Commoner

 

Choi Sooyoung

The always hungry, trouble maker.

Age:18

Rank:Commoner

 

Kim Taeyeon'

The dorky, caring Ahjumma.

Age: 19

Rank: Commoner

 

~Other Characters Will Be Introduced Later In The Story~

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syahdaus #1
Chapter 4: ok.. I just read all chapters so far..

it's a nice fic.. and it's yoonsic...
the fantasy world is good.. I hope more action ... and i hope you are serious in creating the fantasy world.. elaborate if necessary..

waiting for the actual action...

keep up the good work..:)
yoongie_22 #2
I just see this story now and based in the story plot, it's seems very interesting. And OMO! I SEE KARIBOO NIM COMMENT!!! I WILL DEFINETLY READ THIS!
SakuSakura48 #3
Chapter 4: Please update soon
saiko96 #4
Chapter 3: me encanto la historia me moría de risa como Jessica quería golpear a Yoona pero no podía por que era su instructor jajaja épico en serio muy buena historia y vamos por mas YoonSic!!!!
KhimBerry #5
Nah I love young cold and strict attitude so much , I waiting Yoonsic Interaction , maybe this 2 can have some time alone to get know each other more
KhimBerry #6
Nah I love young cold and strict attitude so much , I waiting Yoonsic Interaction , maybe this 2 can have some time alone to get know each other more
ysa7812 #7
Chapter 3: Yoona's so cold and strict.
Waiting for your updates author!
Fighting!
allayjadhule #8
Chapter 3: Yoonsic meet finally ... but yoong so cold hehehehe :)
kariboo17 #9
Chapter 3: You have a good plot. I saw some grammar slips like teeths when the plural is teeth. I suggest you find a beta reader who will correct all this errors. Also, if you don't mind I will give some advice as a fellow author (and a YoonSicretive!). I saw you write like this: "I *pants* found *pants* you." I get that you want to use it to emphasize your statement but it's not advisable. Why not try ("I," She panted for air. "Found," Again she panted desperately for air. "You." She finished.)? I know it takes longer but that's the trick for lengthy updates: Do not shortcut your sentences. I also noticed you used strikethrough a lot. Instead of using that you can use parenthesis. You probably think that I am being overbearing for commenting your errors, but since I have high hopes for your story (and since it has a wonderful plot) I want you to get better. There's only a few active YoonSicretive writers now. All the best for you! Good luck! :)
MaeYapcengco #10
Ohohoho~ i love your story so much! keep updating authornim~ Daebak!!
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