Victory

Description

For Moon Byul Yi soccer is a fun game, for Kim Yong Sun it is her whole life. They are both strikers, playing in the best South Korean clubs, Seoul United and F.C Seoul. Add to this their different temperaments and you have a perfect definition of sworn enemies. But what happens when these two are forced to co-operate, after getting scouted to the national team?  Will they manage to overcome their differences? And let’s not forget about their friends and their dramas...

One thing is for sure, the fight for victory has never been this hard.

Foreword

I came up with an idea for soccer au some time ago with my friend. We were supposed to write this as a collab but long story short, it didn’t work out. However, I’ve found the whole outline of the story recently on my computer and since I really wanted to write something about MoonSun, I thought why not change this into a fic about them. So yeah, originally the characters were different, but since my biases have changed, I decided to change most of the main characters to include girls from not only Mamamoo but also Red Velvet and Twice. Anyway, I hope you will enjoy the story :)

 

This story's beta-reader is BlackRosesTears from Reading is Beautiful ^^​

Poster made by my lovely sister ^^

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Review by Agent Chrono from Asianfanfics Anonymous Agency 

Review thetenthmuse from Reading is Beautiful

 

 

xMoonStar
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detailsbyul #1
you said you should back in 2 weeks ㅠㅠ it's almost 2 years now
yannibear
#2
Chapter 10: Honestly this is a very interesting story and was recommended to me! I hope you continue it because I'd like to read more and more!
chocolate_llama #3
Please please update your story!~
cjmoo_ #4
Chapter 10: Here's some support for you~~
I like the pacing of the story. Also like the progression of Moonsun, which is realistic. I agree with TheOriginalTurnip's comment. :)
cjmoo_ #5
Chapter 6: Hi I've been enjoying this story thus far! I like your detailed descriptions!
xx8472T
#6
Chapter 10: I really like the way you are developing Moonbyul and Yongsun's relationship. It's very realistic and relatable, and your chapters about them make for good reading. I can tell you're a good writer ;) I'm also impressed at your ability to handle multiple relationships at once (Moonsun, Seulrene, Sooyoung + Taeyeon, Taeyeon + Seohyun, etc.). It's pretty hard to handle that many relationships without rambling. Your soccer match "scenes" are really good too. They are dynamic and riveting, with the perfect amount of description in them. I'll be looking forward to the World Cup soccer matches :)

I'm really excited to see where this fanfic goes. It's pretty awesome so far. :) I wish you the best of luck with editing! I understand that editing takes a while. Seeing that this fanfic has been on hiatus for 6 months tells me you're really putting in lots of hard work and effort. Trust me, us readers will fully appreciate your work once you are done. In the mean time, I will be watching out for the next update (because, to be perfectly honest, it would be a tragedy if a good story like this were to be discontinued...) ~ Anyway, happy editing and happy (Lunar) New Year!
tvxqroro
#7
Thanks for this amazing fic authornim :) patiently waiting for your next update
Youngjae08
#8
Chapter 10: Waah I really love this fic esp. the fact that Moonbyul and Sooyoung are friends here hahaha #soshimoo fan here. But nevertheless, really loved the storyline and the soccer au. You did a great job author!!
gloomyclocks
#9
When will this amazing story come back from war <|3. I just want to thank you for writing on OF my very favorite fan fictions on this site. I hope you know that everybody supports you and love you story! Come back to us soon!
whesasomo #10
Chapter 10: Hopefully there is an update soon! I used to play soccer so I love the game, and I love mamamoo. Can't wait for you to finally update!