Chapter 26: Hello! I picked up my trailer. Thank you! http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1150979
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The trailer is short and simple, which I like, but...the trailer is very lacking in many aspects. Though it's my fault that I didn't give enough detail, if you read a chapter or two of the story or just even the foreword, it would help a lot. You could have also messaged me and you don't have to stay with the same girl/OC in the trailer. The characters were also a bit too friendly with each other. I would've preferred if they were less friendly or secretly friendly and a little more angsty or something. I'm sorry if I sound too rough/rude/mean, but this is to help you improve and make better quality trailers.
Chapter 25: I'm picking up now. Thank you so much, agent Alastia! I really love the poster! <3333
Will put it on my story & make the blogpost about this shop ^^
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