Mistakes

Description

Minhwan, he's an orphaned which seems to be hate by everyone at his school. He even being called as a weirdo freak as he is a genius and talented. Everyone envy him as he is. He has no friends, except for a guy named Song Seunghyun.. Seunghyun loves Minhwan and he cares for him. but there something weird about Seunghyun.. He never go to school like Minhwan and he just keep appearing when the midnight comes. Minhwan just neglected it as he has no one to cling for and he loves Seunghyun so much... and one day, a guy (Choi Jonghun) had confessed his feeling to Minhwan but Minhwan refused him and told him to stay away from him as he doesn't want him to be hurted like he is now..

Main

CHOI MINHWAN

http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss218/MSukiSasia/FT%20Island/Choi%20Min%20Hwan/2s0o9aw.jpg

SONG SEUNGHYUN

http://image90.webshots.com/174/7/68/99/2194768990101899789ggVNpo_ph.jpg

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-qT5oSc8oRhM/TZ-jiwwUhoI/AAAAAAAAAzE/a4w-o_rCUoE/s1600/Song_Seung_Hyun7.jpg

CHOI JONGHUN

http://kpopdated.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/choi-jonghoon.jpg?w=400

Foreword

Yay!! for my another oneshot! and this is gonna be a boy x boy.. Hope you'll like it!

and also sorry for the grammar mistakes!

Enjoy reading!! ^^

and please subscribe~~ THANK YOU^^

LOVE, Paranoidfreaker

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Silentgirl34
#1
O_O...What happened to Wonbin and Hongki? Why do they like to hurt poor Minhwannie? At least Seunghyun and Jonghun are there to comfort him. Seunghyun died from suicide because he was bullied like Minhwan? I wonder who bullied him, Hongki and Wonbin? I'm so proud of Jonghun that he was bleeding from all the things wonbin did to him just to protect Minhwan(Fighting Jonghun!). When Seunghyun said to Jaejin that he will be home soon, I was wondering if Jaejin died and what's the reason why he died(suicide maybe?). Anyways, I loved it and I would like to read your other stories(especially if there's Minhwan in it).~FIGHTING!~
jaceBlue #2
this made me teary eyed.. T__T seunghyun~
and jonghoon willing to be hurt for minhwan's sake..
LittleFreakcess #3
Aww so cute .
Seriously? I KNEW IT FROM THE START ! BAM XD
i knew Seunghyun was dead[[ :( my poor baby]] and a ghost in the first place :D hey i knew it wuhu :D even though i dunno why i knew it yay xD lol whats wrong with me?
ForeverCellist
#4
OMG, this is such a good story!!!! QwQ I loved it! There were some grammatical errors (is English not your first language? :3) but that's okay! <br />
SHINee2MinLove #5
uwaaaaa~~~! Nice story!! xDD I like it alott!! :DD
phoebe16
#6
Lol seungjae~ and wow bad boy wonbin!! Tsk tsk tsk...
asdfghjBullySong #7
kyaaa !! i love it .. because it's still SeungJae couple on the end :D eheheh
asdfghjBullySong #8
i think i'll really like your story :D