Between the lips

Description

Jimin is a single dad with a 5-year-old son. Jungkook is a bartender with no family.

Foreword

This just popped into my mind one day and well, i thought i'd give it a try. 

might take a while for me to write this since exams are coming up but i just wanted to put it out there so i remember to write it xD

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GiveMeHope #1
Chapter 1: Wooooow... Really , wow. Like, I like it. A lot. I liked the detail you never told who topped and who bottomed xd Even if Jimin thought he wasn't that confortable with topping, you never know, Mr. Jeon Spreading-legs maybe changed his mind, muahahahahahaha (I'm bottom!Jimin trash, tho, but the ambiguity in ual relationships is just something I find really endearing for some odd reason lol).
But there was something that confused me a little. When he met Jeongguk, there was a line that said the he had 'enough experience to know what he liked and didn't like'. I kinda assumed Jimin was biual, but then, when he woke up and saw Jeongguk and goes like 'I think we ed last night but I'm not gay but it seems I totally have the hots for you so it's okay' and I was like wut. Like, 'I know I prefer being bottom but I'm not into dudes (or at least I won't admit it)...'. Oh, maybe Jeongsan's mother was saaaavage (?). Kiddin'! Now that I think about it, maybe it was the alcohol or some . I don't really know, don't mind me.
I'd love to see the second part, but it's your decision: if you feel it's fine like this, then leave it like it. If you have ideas for the continuation and you'd like to write it, well, I wouldn't complain at all xd
Thank you!
P.D. Jeongguk was cool, don't worry. Cool and cute. And Jimin was his usual sunshine-y self, so it was also cool.
P.P.D. Jeonsan's a total cutie pie and I could eat him and omg he's just adorable.
AbsoluteHominy #2
I'm really liking where this is going. I like the cheekiness between them and Yoongi cracked me up too. Can't wait to read more. ^^
faith3_13 #3
Chapter 1: That was really wonderful. Jeongsan asking who is Jimn's mom was so funny. Great story. Can't wait to read more from you.
sailormoon2001 #4
Chapter 1: Awww!!! That's adorable! Please update soon!
1115dope #5
Chapter 1: Hell yeah i like it!! keep up the good work author nim ;)
JemeneDaga
#6
Chapter 1: Hell yes this was great!
namgyu4ever #7
Chapter 1: Wow... like, I don't have any words. XD
Apples!? Jeongsan is allergic to apples!? XD
Yeah, u succeeeded in making jungkook look as cool as ever xD
But I never got to know who is top and bottome *pouts*
I loved the dialogs like... how do even think of them? *suspicious*
No one wants to hurt jimin yayyyyy except for that girl who left ;-;
Yeah the overall plot was awesome.


CONCLUSION: AHMMM *clears throat* WHATEVER HAPPENED TO MY BABY 16 YEAR OLD CUTIE LIKE HELL, IM COMING THERE YOUNG LADY! THIS IS NOT APROPROATE CHILD CONTENT! JUNGKOOK WAS NOT A SMOOTHIE MAKER OR WHATEVER JUICE GUY, HE WAS A BARTENDAR! R U OLD ENOUGH! ? IM COMING THERE TO TEACH U TO BE INNOCENT YOUNG LADY!!!
swaggerjenn
#8
Chapter 1: i like it, so, keep it up ♥ :)
namgyu4ever #9
What can I say.... jungkook the bartender just has me squealing.... damn da coolness can be felt from miles away.